第1个回答 2013-08-11
This summer holiday, I went to Dalian with my family. We got there by air. Dalian is a very beautiful and modern city. On the bus, we could see all kinds of buildings which were great.
In the morning, we got to the hotel where we lived. After breakfast, we began to our travel. First we took the bus to the Sea Park. There are so many different kinds of fishes that I couldn’t believe my eyes. We also saw the show of dolphins. Then we had lunch in a restaurant. The seafood which was very famous in China was delicious.
After lunch we went swimming. The sea was blue and beach was golden. We all enjoyed ourselves in the sea. Finally we went back the hotel where we lived. We had a happy day.
In this trip, we also went to some places which were interesting and famous in Dalian, went shopping and so on.
Several days later, we left Dalian. On our way home, we were very happy. This was the reason why we didn’t feel tired. In all, we had a good holiday.
第2个回答 2013-08-11
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An Unforgettable Travel
My families plan to visit the interesting place p of Shanghai.We are led to the Oriental Pearl TV Tower ,a famous tourist attraction,which is on every Shanghainese's lips.It is a magnificent building located in Pudong New Area,it is the tallest building,so it's very easy to see this building,even if you are several miles away it.As we get to the high floor of the Oriental Pearl TV Tower,we see the attractive viwswhich includes the Huangpu River through the window.At the moment,l suddenly moved by the builders put their soul and energy to this building and let it be a landmark of this city.
This is the trip l never forget.
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An unforgettable experience
Usually,the first time you did something is unforgettable,although it couldn't be always wonderful.
As for me,an unforgettable experience of mine is the first time I joined the Red Cross.We took boxes,and walked on the street.We found some people on the street,then asked them to raise some money for Red Cross.At first,we were so surprised that just a few people would raise some money for Red Cross,and some people even thought we were cheat!But we weren't upset.We went on and worked for the whole day.
During that day,we all felt tired but happy,because we raised much money.We looked at the boxes and smiled.
It's really an unforgettable experience!
第3个回答 2014-07-28
这篇作文是我考试原文，满分20得了16分，望采纳
Experience
Experience can makes us grow as a person and help you learn a new
lessons in your life. My experience is that I went to a summer camp last year.
My parents sent me to there because of they wanted me to make some
friends. But I was too shy to spoke to anyone. When they were laughing and speaking
,I sat in silence and felt even more lonely. But a girl came to me ,she played
with me and spoke to me .Suddnely I felt the touch of something bright. Now,
the girl become my best friend and we stick together all day like gule.
Now I believe that the world is what you think it is. If you think you
are lonely ,you might always be alone .My suggestion is: Smile at the world
,and it will smile back.