假设你喜欢的老师是Mr. Wang 或者Ms. Wang.请根据下面的提示,以My favorite teacher 为题目,用英语写一

假设你喜欢的老师是Mr. Wang 或者Ms. Wang.请根据下面的提示,以My favorite teacher 为题目,用英语写一篇短文。要求:1. 必须包括①description ②friendship ③the best quality 三个方面的内容,括号内的提示可以任意选择或可以适当发挥。 2.文中不得出现真实姓名或学校。 3.字数(80-100)(文章题目和开头已经给出,不计入总次数)①description (appearance, character…)favorite teacher ②friendship (an event between you; the story of becoming friends)③the best quality (kind; warm-hearted; strict; helpful…)My favorite teacherMy favorite teacher is ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________


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My favorite teacher is Ms. Wang. She is a 36- year-old woman. But she is tall and has long straight hair. And she often wears black pants and a white shirt. She teaches us English. We all like listening to her. Her classes are very interesting and creative. Because she has different ways of teaching. But she is very strict with us in everything. She is warm-hearted. We all know she is always ready to help others. When we are in trouble, she can try her best to help us. We all like her, and she likes us, too.  

试题分析:这是一篇提纲类作文,要求写一篇介绍自己老师的短文。本题给出的材料较为简略,动笔前应先认真阅读材料,围绕所给材料组织内容,注意从三个方面进行描写。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称,需要注意人称和谓语动词的搭配问题,时态为一般现在时态,这方面需要注意的问题比较少。注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系,适当使用连接词。
点评:做英语书面表达时,要注意认真审题,分析体裁,确定时态;分析内容要点,列出一些基本词汇及词组;注意表达的条理性,用好连接词。最后,注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。日常学习中,注意多背诵范文,熟记一些经典句型,考试时就能有所参照,有的放矢。
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