高中英语短文改错!10个错误

Dr Dan Rivers, a famous American psychiatrist says that activity,no people, is the real key to be overcoming loneliness.In general,people think that if one suffers from loneliness,he need the companionship of other people very urgent.And Dr. Rivers says that, as the matter of fact,the quest for new companionship often makes people more lonely.Over the passed sixteen years,Dr.Rivers has interviewed as much as 3,000 people on the question of loneliness and how to overcome.As a result of the conclusion that active people are less likely to feel lonely.The majority of the people interviewing said that whenever they are lonely,they try to find something new to do.

第1个回答  2014-03-12
Dr Dan Rivers, a famous American psychiatrist says that activity,no people, is the real key to be no改成without;去掉beovercoming loneliness.In general,people think that if one suffers from loneliness,he need the overcoming改为overcome;去掉thecompanionship of other people very urgent.And Dr. Rivers says that, as the matter of fact,the quest for new urgent 改为urgently; the 改为acompanionship often makes people more lonely.Over the passed sixteen years,Dr.Rivers has interviewed passed 改为past;has 改为hadas much as 3,000 people on the question of loneliness and how to overcome.As a result of the conclusion question改为questions;that active people are less likely to feel lonely.The majority of the people interviewing said that whenever interviewing改为interviewed
第2个回答  2014-03-12
Dr Dan Rivers, a famous American psychiatrist says that activity,not people, is the real key to be overcoming loneliness.In general,people think that if one suffers from loneliness,he needs the companionship of other people very urgently.And Dr. Rivers says that, as the matter of fact,the quest for new companionship often makes people more lonely.Over the passed sixteen years,Dr.Rivers has interviewed as many as 3,000 people on the question of loneliness and how to overcome.As a result of the conclusion that active people are less likely to feel lonely.The majority of the people interviewed said that whenever they are lonely,they try to find something new to do. 不好意思,就找到这几个,其他看着对
第3个回答  2014-03-12
Dr Dan Rivers, a famous American psychiatrist says that activity,no people, is the real key to be overcoming loneliness.In general,people think that if one suffers from loneliness,he need the companionship of other people very urgent.And Dr. Rivers says that, as the matter of fact,the quest for new companionship often makes people more lonely.Over the passed sixteen years,Dr.Rivers has interviewed as much as 3,000 people on the question of loneliness and how to overcome.As a result of the conclusion that active people are less likely to feel lonely.The majority of the people interviewing said that whenever they are lonely,they try to find something new to do. 1.no——not;2.删除be;3.need——needs;4.of —— with;5.And——But;6.the——a;7.passed——past;8.much——many;9.said——say;10.whenever——when.
第4个回答  2014-03-12
not people needs,三单一般时,to overcome 非谓语动词作key的定语 urgently副词修饰needpassed ---past pass 经过;past过去的as many as people可数名词复数overcome it 及物动词interviewied 过去分词做定语,表示被动含义去掉conclusion后面的that, 短语做状语