麻烦帮我翻译一下 英文

要发表一篇英文文章 但是因为我的英文太烂了 自己写了一篇觉得错的地方很多 所以希望帮帮我

现在我向大家介绍我的朋友xxx 他出生在中国今年21岁。 他的性格很好所以身边有很多的朋友。他的兴趣是网络游戏和唱歌 他网络游戏玩的很好 ,和朋友们玩的时候经常能赢。放学后他喜欢和他的朋友一起打篮球 但是他打的不是很好。如果大家和他有相同的兴趣可以联系他。最后有一件重要的事,就是他现在还没有女朋友,希望大家有合适的女孩介绍给他

大概发表2分钟左右就可以 谢谢了 非常急 明天早晨9点发表 在线等

第1个回答  2008-09-22
现在我向大家介绍我的朋友xxx 他出生在中国今年21岁。 他的性格很好所以身边有很多的朋友。他的兴趣是网络游戏和唱歌 他网络游戏玩的很好 ,和朋友们玩的时候经常能赢。放学后他喜欢和他的朋友一起打篮球 但是他打的不是很好。如果大家和他有相同的兴趣可以联系他。最后有一件重要的事,就是他现在还没有女朋友,希望大家有合适的女孩介绍给他

翻译如下:

Now please allow me to introduce my good friend XXX(请允许我向大家介绍,这样说法更有礼貌). He is 21 years old and was born in China. (一般英语都是先说年龄,再说哪里出生) He has a lot of friends, and all of them find that he is very easy-going. (这样翻译比较好,就是说是朋友认为他性格好,比较有说服力) He has high interest in online games and singing. He usually wins his friends in the online games. Besides, he likes to play basketball with friends, but he is not very good at it. Please kindly contact him if you find there is common interest between you and him. Finally, what I wish to tell is that he is still single and available now(老外一般介绍自己有没有女朋友的时候,都是说single and available,而不是直接说有没有女生,这样翻译反正更专业和恰当。而且用what i wish to tell更加恰当). If you think you are the right one for him or you know someone who suits him, do not hesitate to approach him(这里用approach,而不是introduce,显得更加恰当、准确。approach的意思比introduce更加深,非常适合用在这里。而且一般这种结尾也都是说donot hesitate,有一种语气在里面,就是鼓励大家有合适的,就马上介绍给他吧。呵呵。)!

你可能发现有些词语和语序我稍微做了下改动。这样做是为了更加符合英语的说法和文化。我在英语国家读书快5年了。希望你相信我。
第2个回答  2008-09-22
now let me introduce my friend xxx to you all,he was born in china and now 21 old ,he is kindly and got a lot of close friends.he likes singing and playing pc games and do that quite well,after school he play basketball with friends although he's not very good at it . so if you thought he's a funny guy ,call him and be his friend ,by the way he hasn't got a girlfriend yet .so it will be so kind of you to introduce a pretty girl to him .
wish you have a good day~
第3个回答  2008-09-22
Now I would like to introduce my friend xxx He was born in China this year, 21-year-old. His character so close to a lot of good friends. He is interested in online games and online games to play songs he's very good friends and often play to win. After school he and his friends like to play basketball together, but he's not playing very well. If you and he have the same interest can contact him. Finally, there is one important thing is that he is not yet a girlfriend, and hope that we have the right to introduce girls to him本回答被提问者采纳
第4个回答  2008-09-22
现在我向大家介绍我的朋友xxx 他出生在中国今年21岁。 他的性格很好所以身边有很多的朋友。他的兴趣是网络游戏和唱歌 他网络游戏玩的很好 ,和朋友们玩的时候经常能赢。放学后他喜欢和他的朋友一起打篮球 但是他打的不是很好。如果大家和他有相同的兴趣可以联系他。最后有一件重要的事,就是他现在还没有女朋友,希望大家有合适的女孩介绍给他:

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Now I will introduce to you all my friend, _____. He was born in China, and is twenty-one years old this year. Because he has a very easy-going personality, he has a lot of close friends. Some of his hobbies include computer games and singing. He is very skilled in computer games, and he often wins when he challenges his friends. Afer school, he enjoys playing basketball with friends, but he is not very good at it. If anyone shares similar interests with him, please contact him. Lastly, he does not yet have a girlfriend, so I hope that someone will be able to introduce a girl to him.

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