英语短文改错,10处错误!

Dear Ken,
I am very exciting to learn that you're coming to Beijing for the Olympics.Both my parent miss you a lot. So do our friend,Cathy.August is the best time of the year to visit Beijing,because of there is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot nor too cold.There are so many place I want to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer.When you come,you can stay with ourselves.My home is about three kilometres far away from the National stadium, also known as the "Bird's Nest",where opening ceremony will be held.
It is five years now since I graduate from No.3 High shool.Last Saturday.the class that I was on held a get-together,which took us a long time prapare.It was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody and set a well time for all of us.We all enjoyed this precious day greatly,remember the time we spent togeher and the people they were familiar with.It was a pity which some of ua were not present as they had went abroad for further studies,but they called back or sent greeting card from different places.
还有一篇改错也帮忙改改,谢谢了啊~~~

第1个回答  2011-06-11
1.exciting=excited
2.So do our friend,Cathy.=So does our friend,Cathy.
3.you're coming to =you will come to
4.Both=Both of
5.August is the best time of the year to visit Beijing.=August is the best time to visit Beijing in the year to visit Beijing.
6.because of =because
7.place=places
8.like a volunteer=as a volunteer
9.stay with ourselves=stay with us
10.also known as the "Bird's Nest"=which is known as the "Bird's Nest"
第2个回答  2011-06-11
exciting-excited ;parent-parents;do(So do our friend)-does;because of-去掉of; so many place-places;ourselves-us;
第3个回答  2011-06-11
very excited
both my parents
so does our friend
because there is
only little rain
so many places
work as a volunteer
stay with us
three kilometres far from
where the opening ceremoney本回答被网友采纳
第4个回答  2011-06-11
very excited
so does our friend
because there is
only a little
so many places
work as a volunteer
stay with us
three kilometres far from
where the opening ceremoney