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作文题目:1、现在大学校园里迟到早退旷课是常见现象2、保证大学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性3、作为大学生应该怎样做
Nowadays,it's commen that college students are often late for class.Moreover,it's also s usual phenomenon that they leave class too early and are even absent ,which are far beyond teachers' expectation and arouse widely public attention.These behavior undoutfully do harm to students' future and education of the whole nation.
As we all know,wether we could attend class regularly and on time to some degree reflect the extent that we control ourselves.As an old saying goes,you are your worst enemy.Whether you can control youself properly can have a influence on your future life.Additionally,the nomber of students attending class could affect the emotion of teathers.Then,the quality of the class will be affected,which will decide how much students can learn in class.Last but not least,the knowlege in the text books are limited.Only by teachers' explanation can we apply what we have learned to our lives in the future.
Therefore,as students,wo should get a habit of attending class regularlyand listening to the teacher carefully.Then we can graduate with full of knowlege and our college will be worthy

第1个回答  2010-12-13
第二句后面的并列 语法不对 behaviors
第2个回答  2010-12-11
好多错误额~单词的语法的都有~不过我只知道错了,不会改~嘿嘿。。
第3个回答  2010-12-12
好多错误额~单词的语法的都有~be get a habit本回答被网友采纳