请帮我翻译成英文。不要用翻译机!谢谢

亲爱的亚马逊:
我是来自中国的客户,我非常喜欢亚马逊。并且相信其销售的商品质量很棒。但是这次的商品让我很失望,我购买的Order Number: 103-8803899-7611436,Schwinn Thrasher Adult Micro Bicycle black/grey Helmet (Adult) 竟然收到后零件破损。虽然路途遥远,但是快递箱子都没出现问题。如果只是运输磕碰造成的。我怀疑这个能不能很好的保护我的头部。希望能给予解决和帮助。谢谢!

第1个回答  2012-10-04
我试试吧~~

Dear Amazon:
Greetings from China!
I'm a Chinese customer and I appreciate Amazon a lot, especially the credits of your products.But this time,I'm a little disappointed.
I bought a "Schwinn Thrasher Adult Micro Bicycle black/grey(这个到底是black还是grey啊?你自己改一下哦~) Helmet (Adult)" days ago.My Order Number is 103-8803899-7611436.The express packing is okey,but the helmet is somehow broken. I definitely doubt that wether it can protect my head if it breaks so easy.
Looking forward to your reply and hoping you can find a solution of this.Thanks a lot!

就酱紫吧~~也不知道翻译的到不到位~~好久没写英语作文了厄- -#
第2个回答  2012-10-06
Dear amazon:
I amone of your customer from China, I really like the amazon. And i believed that all of the products you are handing have a good quality, But this commodity makes me very disappointed,Order Number: 103-8803899-7611436, Schwinn Thrasher Adult Micro Bicycle black/grey Helmet (Adult) I purchased, I received damaged parts,thought it's a long freight, but express box didn't appear any problem. If the damage caused by transport against. I suspect that this can be protect my head. Hope I can give your solution and help soon. Thank you!本回答被提问者采纳
第3个回答  2012-10-04
dear Yamason director, I am your customers from China, I always like shoping in Yamason, and believe in the quality of the goods. but now, I am wrting to express my dispear to your goods, which's order number is 103-8803899-7611436....
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