I had a great time traveling with my classmates last summer.We went to a small island and enjoyed the sunshine there.We played volleyball and swam happily.We also went fishing.The island was really a beautiful place to take a holiday. Everyone enjoyed himself.
追问这样写能行吗?
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追答第二行my schoolmates
挺不错的,可以尝试加上自己的Feeling和结尾
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