高分求翻译！！汉译英

Question

随着科学技术的不断提高，计算机科学逐渐进入人类社会的各个领域并发挥着越来越重要的作用。一直以来人们使用传统人工的方式管理学生成绩，这种管理方式存在着许多缺点。通过实现学生管理系统，让教师使用计算机对学生成绩进行管理，方便了教师对学生成绩的管理，同时也方便了学生对成绩的查询。
学生成绩管理系统是典型的信息管理系统(MIS)，其开发主要包括后台数据库的建立和维护以及前端应用程序的开发两个方面。对于前者要求建立起数据一致性和完整性强、数据安全性好的库。而对于后者则要求应用程序功能完备，易使用等特点。
该系统采用MVC开发模式，客户端/服务器(B/S)结构作为系统的基本结构。本系统采用了MYSQL数据库来进行数据库设计，使用Eclipse开发工具进行开发。使用JSP对网页进行设计。
本系统的主要分为学生功能模块和教师功能模块。学生功能模块可以进行帐号注册、学生成绩查询 学生的课程查询等功能。教师管理模块可以对学生的成绩进行增加、删除、修改。查询功能是系统的核心功能之一，在系统中可以按照学号查询也可以按照姓名查询等等。

上面这些文字翻译成英文，已经高分求，如果翻译的更好，追加50分！

Answer 1

With the continuous improvement of science and technology, computer science is entering the human society in various fields and play an increasingly important role. Has been the use of traditional methods of the management of student achievement, such management methods, there are many shortcomings. Through the realization of student management system that allows teachers to use computers for student performance management, facilitate the teachers on student performance management, but also facilitate the achievement of students enquiries.
Student performance management system is a typical management information system (MIS), including the development of its database background to the establishment and maintenance, and front-end application development aspects. With regard to the former request to establish data consistency and integrity of strong, good for data security. For the latter request applications fully functional, easy to use and so on.
The system uses MVC development model, client / server (B / S) structure as the system's basic structure. The system uses a database to MYSQL database design, use Eclipse development tools for development. The use of the JSP page design.
The system's main function modules into students and teachers function modules. Students can function modules account registration, student achievement for students for the courses, and other functions. Teachers management module can be conducted on the achievements of students to add, delete, modify. Query system is one of the core functions, the system can learn, in accordance with enquiries can also query by name, and so on.

Answer 2

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计算机专业毕业设计论文的摘要。。。
想起自己毕业那阵子，帮别人翻译英语，直到看到英语就想吐。。。
我比较倾向于joeyang2008的答案。
加油啊！！