有什么可以让英语作文加分的短语或句子

Question

我现在高二了，英语作文老是一般般，老师说作文里最好有那些让人眼前一亮才会更高分，所以大家有没有什么短语或句子，我可以拿来背

Answer 1

　我以前的英语作文也很一般 总是拿不到高分 老师说没有亮点 我就收集了很多在多种场合都可以用的句子 很愿意和你一起分享！ : 　　（一）段首句 　　1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为…… 　　There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____. 　　2. 俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。 　　There is an old saying______. It"s the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today. 　　3. 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。 　　Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.
　　4. 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。 　　Nowadays，it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides，______. 　　5. 任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。 　　Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.
　　6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，…… 　　People's opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____. 　 　　
　7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。
　　Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.
　　8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。
　　______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
　　9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
　　______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
　　10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢？
　　According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______ while. Obviously，______，but why?
　　（二）中间段落句
　　1. 相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……。
　　On the contrary，there are some people in favor of ___.At the same time，they say____.
　　2. 但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……。最糟糕的是……。
　　But I don"t think it is a very good way to solve ____.For example，____.Worst of all，___.
8. 然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一面，象……。
　　However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as ______.
　　9. 尽管如此，我相信……更有利。
　　Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous.
　　10. 完全同意……这种观点（陈述），主要理由如下：
　　I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______.
　　（三）结尾句
　　1. 至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为……
　　As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ____.
　　2. 总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来……。
　　In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.Only in this way can ______in the future.
　　3. 但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势（好处）。例如，……，而……。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于（喜欢）……
　　But ______and ______have their own advantages. For example, _____, while_____. Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to______.
　　4. 就我个人而言，我相信……，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……
Personally, I believe that_____. Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because______.
　　5. 随着社会的发展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自已的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。
　　With the development of society, ______.So it"s urgent and necessary to ____.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.
　　6. 至于我（对我来说，就我而言），我认为……更合理。只有这样，我们才能……
　　For my part, I think it reasonable to_____. Only in this way can you _____.
　　7. 对我来说，我认为有必要……。原因如下：第一，……； 第二，……；最后……但同样重要的是……
　　In my opinion, I think it necessary to____. The reasons are as follows. First _____.Second ______. Last but not least,______.
　　8. 在总体上很难说……是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现……。
　　It is difficult to say whether _____is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of______. However, from a personal point of view find______.
　　9. 综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论……
From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that____.
　　10. 如果我们不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了这种趋势，就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是……
　　If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is_____.

Answer 2

1. But unpopular as red has been in the past, at the moment it is a favorite hair dye.
结构：全句有2个谓语动词：has been和is.其中，as引导的让步状语从句是一个部分倒装句，按照正常语序应该是Although red has been unpopular in the past.句子可被拆分为，
1). Red has been unpopular in the past.
2). But at the moment it is a favorite hair dye.
翻译：尽管过去红色不怎么流行，现在却是一种备受欢迎的染发颜色。
2. Only when he has lost his way does he realize that he wasn't careful enough to make sure that he really did understand.
结构：全句有4个谓语动词：has，does realize，wasn't和did understand..其中主句的是does realize.本句话是以only开头的强调句，其所强调的是when引导的条件状语从句。第一个that引导的是realize的宾语从句。第一个 that引导的是make sure的宾语从句。
翻译：只有当他迷了路，他才明白到当时自己不够谨慎，没有确定自己是否真的懂了。
3. Only by becoming wealthier can countries correct these conditions.
结构：全句只有1个谓语动词：can correct.本句话是以only开头的强调句，其所强调的是方式状语by becoming wealthier.按照正常语序应该是：Countries can correct these conditions only by becoming wealthier.由only引导的倒装句句型是可以在雅思写作中发挥很大作用的，因为only表达的意思的唯一性和句式的复杂性都可以吸引考官。
翻译：一个国家只有通过变得富强才能纠正这些问题。
4. Were it left to me to decide whether we should have a government without newspapers or newspapers without government, I should not hesitate a moment to prefer the latter.
结构：全句有3个谓语动词：were，should have和should hesitate.其中主句的是：should hesitate.本句是一个条件式虚拟倒装句。前半部分是一个if引导的条件状语从句，按照正常语序为：If it were left to me to decide…。whether引导的是decide的宾语从句。
翻译：如果由我来决定是有政府无报纸还是有报纸无政府，我会毫不犹豫选择后者。
5. Out of our emotional experience with objects and events comes a social feeling of agreement that certain things and actions are “good” and others are “bad”.
结构：全句有3个谓语动词：comes，are和 are.其中主句的是：comes，两个are是that引导的主语feeling的同位语从句中的两个并列谓语。为了避免造成头重脚轻的感觉，主句是一个完全倒装句，按照正常语序句子主干应该为：A social feeling of agreement …comes out of our emotional experience with objects and events.由介词短语引导的倒装句也是可以让雅思写作拿高分的句型，十分有用。
翻译：从我们对于客观物体和事件的情感经验中产生了一种共同的社会情绪：某些东西和行为是“好的”而其他的是“坏的”。
6. Among the most promising and most thoroughly researched probiotics is the GG strain of Lactobacillus, discovered by Dr. Sherwood Gorbach and biochemist Barry Goldin, both at Tufts University School of Medicine.
结构：全句只有1个谓语动词：is.整个句子是一个完全倒装句，按照正常语序句子主干应该是：The GG strain of Lactobacillus …is among the most promising and most thoroughly researched probiotics.过去分词短语discovered by…作为后置定语修饰the GG strain of Lactobacillus，后面的短语both at…则是两个人名的定语。
翻译：由塔夫茨大学医学院舍伍德·哥尔巴赫教授和生化学家巴利·格尔丁发现的鼠李糖乳杆菌是最有前途并且研究得最充分的益生菌之一。
7. Only when total production expands faster than the rate of labor force growth plus the rate of productivity increase and minus the rate at which average annual hours fall does the unemployment rate fall.
结构：全句有4个谓语动词：expands，fall和does fall.其中主句的是：does fall.这是一个由only开头的条件式强调句，主句采用倒装句式。按照正常语序句子主干应该为：the unemployment rate does fall.在when引导的条件状语从句中which引导的是第三个rate的定语从句。
翻译：只有当总产量增长率大于劳动力增长速率加上生产力增长率并减去平均年劳动时间下降的速率时，失业率才会下降。
短语
1，成本低的 cost-effective
　　2，传统的朝九晚五 the traditional nine-to-five office routine　　3，额外的费用 extra expenses　　4，改良的生活方式 an improved lifestyle　　5，归属感 a sense of belonging　　6，过着懒散的生活 lead an indolent life　　7，交通阻塞 traffic congestion　　8，可以使用，接触 have access to　　9，灵活的工作时间表 flexible work schedule　　10，平衡工作和家庭的关系 balance work and family　　11，提升个人能力 improve personal skills　　12，拥挤的公共交通 crowded public transport

Answer 3

当年我用过的：Many people insist that...
　　很多人坚持认为...
　　With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that...
　　随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为...
　　A lot of people seem to think that...
　　很多人似乎认为...
　　引出不同观点:
　　People's views on... vary from person to person. Some hold that... . However, others believe that....
　　人们对...的观点因人而异.有些人认为.....然而其他人却认为．．．
　　People may have different opinions on...
　　人们对...可能会有不同的见解.
　　Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person.
　　人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.
　　There are different opinions among people as to...
　　关于.... 人们的观点大不相同.
　　Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure).
　　对(失败)人们的态度各不相同.
　　结尾部分
　　Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that...
　　把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论...
　　Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that...
　　考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论..There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.
　　毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.
　　All in all, we cannot live without... But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.
　　总之,我们没有...是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.
　　提出建议:
　　It is high time that we put an end to the (trend). 该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.
　　It is time to take the advice of ... and to put special emphasis on the improvement of ...
　　该是采纳...的建议,并对...的进展给予特殊重视的时候了.
　　There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of ...
　　毫无疑问,对...问题应予以足够的重视.
　　Obviously,.... If we want to do something... , it is essential that...
　　显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是...
　　Only in this way can we... 只有这样,我们才能...
　　It must be realized that... 我们必须意识到...
　　预示后果:
　　Obviously, if we don't control the problem, the chances are that... will lead us in danger.
　　很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险.
　　No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that...
　　毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会...
　　It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.
　　很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.
　　论证部分
　　From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.
　　在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.
　　I cannot entirely agree with the idea that... 我无法完全同意这一观点....
　　Personally, I am standing on the side of ...就个人而言,我站在...的一边.
　　I sincerely believe that... 我真诚地相信...
　　In my opinion, it is more advisable to do ... than to do....
　　在我个人看来,做...比做...更明智.
　　Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why...
　　坦诚地说，最后，还有一个较为实际的原因，_________。
　　给出原因:
　　This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. First, ... Second, ... Third, ...
　　这一现象的存在是有许多原因的.首先, ... 第二, ... 第三, ...
　　Why did... ? For one thing... For another.... Perhaps the primary reason is...
　　为什么会...? 一个原因是... 令一个原因是...或许其主要原因是....
　　I quite agree with the statement that... the reasons are chiefly as follows.
　　我十分赞同这一论述,即...,其主要原因如下:
　　列出解决办法:
　　Here are some suggestions for handling...　　这是如何处理某事的一些建议.
　　The best way to solve the troubles is... 　解决这些麻烦的最好办法是...
　　People have figured out many ways to solve this problem. 人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题.
　　批判错误观点和做法:
　　As far as something is concerned, .... 就某事而言,...
　　It was obvious that... 很显然,....
　　It may be true that..., but it doesn't mean that...　　可能...是对的,但这并不意味着...
　　It is natural to believe that... , but we shouldn't ignore that... 认为....是很自然的,但我们不应忽视....
　　There is no evidence to suggest that... 没有证据表明...
　　作文中常用连接词的选择
　　表示强调的连接词
　　still, Indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially. Obviously, clearly.
　　表示比较的连接词
　　like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.
　　表示对比的连接词
　　by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas, unlike, yet, in contrast.
　　表示列举的连接词
　　for example, for instance, such as, take ...for example. Except (for), to illustrate.
　　表示时间的连接词
　　later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, during, nowadays, since, lately, as soon as, afterwards, temporarily, earlier, now, after a while.
　　表示顺序的连接词
　　first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important.
　　表示可能的连接词
　　presumably, probably, perhaps.
　　用于解释的连接词
　　in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in simpler terms.
　　表示递进的连接词
　　What is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, furthermore, as well as, additionally, again.
　　表示让步的连接词
　　although, after all, in spite of..., despite, even if, even though, though, admittedly, whatever may happen.
　　表示转折的连接词
　　however, rather than, instead of, but, yet, on theother hand, unfortunately. whereas
　　表示原因的连接词
　　for this reason, due to, thanks to, because, because of, as, since, owing to.
　　表示结果的连接词
　　as a result, thus, hence, so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, as consequence.
　　用于总结的连接词
　　on the whole, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, in brief, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, in short.
　　其他类型连接词
　　Mostly, occasionally, currently, naturally, mainly, exactly, evidently, frankly, commonly, for this purpose, to a large extent, for most of us, in many cases, in this case,
　　图表作文常用句型
　　As is shown in the graph... 如图所示...
　　The graph shows that... 图表显示...
　　As can be seen from the table,... 从表格中可以看出...
　　From the chart, we know that... 从这张表中,我们可知...
　　All these data clearly prove the fact that...
　　所有这些数据明显证明这一事实,即...
　　The increase of .... In the city has reached to 20%...
　　在这个城市的增长已达到20%.
　　In 1985, the number remained the same.
　　1985年,这个数字保持不变.
　　There was a gradual decline in 1989.
　　1989年,出现了逐渐下降的情况.

Answer 4

我这儿是考研英语 能给你的我还真没有。。要高分的话 老师看的就是你的句型， 多多用各种从句， 神马定语从句 表语从句 状语从句等等，还有分词短语 过去分词 现在分词 不定式等等~ 句子怎么复杂怎么整 高中老师都爱那一套~ 你可以试试把你平淡的一句表达换成从句等等， 一回生二回熟 写多了就有套路了~ 当年刚学从句的时候 我一篇作文用了个非限定定语从句 老师说班上就我一个人用了 把我得瑟的 哈哈~ 还有就是把你们新学的那些词语表达都用上了 老师也很喜欢 再者 字迹要工整~ 你实在整不明白可以把你们班上的高分作文借来看看 看人家是怎么写的 看看人家亮点是什么 万一没看出来亮点拿着作文就去问老师 英语老师可喜欢问问题的学生了~

Answer 5

e.g much to one's surprise not only but also it is…that only if加倒桩 很多啊，，，比较复杂的就行了