高二英语作文

Question

Dear Editor

Nice to meet to you .My name is Wang Lin ,Today,l want to tell somethings about modern technology methods .Our school English teachers change their teaching way and it cause many difficulties
In the past ,English class is boring and tired,50 per cent of students feel asleep in class.The teacher's saying is hard to understand .The rather that to notice.And almost all of students only write not think .Students forget knowledge sooner.
But now ,the new modern technology make students begin to thinking .The seeing ,hearing,saying has be improvement.It become easy to notice and exchange difficult for easy.Students love study and study by themselves.
So,in my opinion ,the modern technology is good for us.Students can learn more in class.and active to study.

Wang Lin
求修改，作文渣

Answer 1

第一段意思有问题吧？
today i want to tell something about my English teacher changing her teaching methods and thus make a huge difference in our class.
第二段 tired改为 tiring, saying改为words
后面那句我不太清楚你想表达什么意思，先改着吧：more notably,almost all the students prefer writing rather than thinking, so they soon forget what they learnt.
begin to think
seeing改为reading saying改为speaking

be改为been
improvement改为improved
后面那句错得。。有点彻底：Now it's easy to conclude that study has became a joy rather than burden.sudent love study by themselves.
最后一句：students can learn more in class and be active to study

Answer 2

亲爱的编辑
很高兴见到你。我的名字是王林，今天，我想谈谈现代技术方法的选择。我们学校的英语教师改变自己的教学方式，它会造成很多困难
在过去，英语课很无聊和厌倦，百分之50的学生都在课堂上睡觉。老师和# 039；的话很难理解。而这注意。几乎所有的学生只写不想忘记的知识。学生更快。
但现在，新的现代科技使学生开始思考。看到，听到，说已经被改进。它变得容易注意到交易难易。学生热爱学习，自主学习。
所以，在我看来，现代科技对我们是有好处的。学生可以学习班活动更多的研究。
王林
望采纳，谢谢！

Answer 3

Dear Editor

My name is Wang Lin, I am writing to you to tell you something about the modern technological teaching methods in our school .Our English teacher changes the way of teaching and it causes many changes in our studies.
In the past ,English class is boring ,50 per cent of students fell asleep in class. Because it is hard for them to understand what the teachers said. Even though they understand , the majority of the students only write down what the teachers said instead of thinking . As a result, the students forget the knowledge soon.
But now ,the new modern technological methods lead students to think. what's more, their abilitiy of seeing ,listening and speaking has been greated improved. Moreover, the studets find it is easier for them to understand and remember what teachers said. Gradually ,they become more interested in their studies.
In conclusion ,the modern technology plays a important role in our studies. It is a wise choice for our teacher to take advantage of the modern technological methods.
Yours Sincerely,
Wang Lin