求润色这篇英语作文。

Question

Hello,everybody.
My name is XXX,and my Chinese name is XXX. I am XX years old.I graduated from XXX School.
My hobbies include watching movies,surfing the Internet as well as reading books and listening to music in my spare time.
I have always been told by my friends that I am an open and optimistic person who is easy to get along with.Also I'm a person with strong will and an independent mind.
Nowadays, I am very glad to know all of you and wish to make friends with you.I believe we will have a great time during the following school years here. Thank you very much!

高一的自我介绍。求检查一下有没有错误然后润色一下。最好能用点高级词汇。谢谢。

Answer 1

Hello,everybody. My name is XXX,and you may call my English name XXX. I am XX years old.I graduated from XXX School.
Watching movies,surfing on the Internet, reading books as well as listening to the music are my hobbies in my leisure time which can relax me and enrich my scope.
I am an open-minded and optimistic person who is easy to get along with, that helped me make a lot of friends. Moreover, I'm a person with strong will and independent mind.
Now, I am very glad to know you and wish to make friends with you. I believe we would share a memorable time during the coming school years here. Thank you!

Answer 2

Hello,everybody.
My name is XXX,and my Chinese name is XXX. I am XX years old.I graduated from XXX School.
My hobbies include watching movies,surfing the Internet as well as reading books and listening to music in my spare time.
I have always been told by my friends that I am an open and optimistic person who is easy to get along with.Also I'm a person with strong will and an independent mind.
Nowadays, I am very glad to know all of you and wish to make friends with you.I believe we will have a great time during the following school years here. Thank you very much!

Answer 3

I am at the age of xx. open改outgoing.I have a number of hobbies including........Nowadays多表示如今，现代，改为This moment,