英语短文改错有10个错误帮忙！

Question

This is my first time to write an English e- mail. I came across your maganize about two months before and I loved it from the firest moment, After the school, I ran to but it.So far I bought two issues. I like every editor in you magazine, Learning with them always make me happy. Next month I will challenge me to read an advanced magazine. So I will also buy your magazine, read two magazines at the same time. I think this will help me ger through my spare time meanful.

Best wish to all of you.
有10个错...快来！

Answer 1

1、This is my first time to write an English e- mail.
is→was
2、I came across your maganize about two months before and I loved it from the firest moment。
before→ago
3、After the school I ran to but it
删除the，but→buy
4、So far I bought two issues
bought→has bought
5、 I like every editor in you magazine
in→of
6、Learning with them always make me happy
make→makes
7、Next month I will challenge me to read an advanced magazine
me →myself
8、So I will also buy your magazine, read two magazines at the same time
read→reading
9、I think this will help me ger through my spare time meanful.
meanful→meaningful
10、Best wish to all of you.
wish→wishes

Answer 2

two months before---two months ago
After the school --- After school (放学以后）
I bought --- I have bought （so far常与现在完成时连用）
make me --- makes me （单个动名词短语作主语，谓语用单数）
challenge me --- challege myself
So I will also--- But I will also
read two --- reading two （一个句子中不能出现两个谓语）
meaningful --- meaningfully（修饰动词短语get through应该用副词）
Best wish --- Best wishes
上面这九个比较有把握，另一个一时找不出来了。
* 有几个拼写错误，估计是你的手误吧？短文改错一般不出拼写错误：
the firest(first) moment
I ran to but (buy) it.
help me ger (get)本回答被提问者采纳

Answer 3

before-ago, firest-first, after the school 的the 去掉，but 改成buy,bought 前面加have，learning with的with 改成from， make改成makes,me改成myself，read two magazine 前面加and, ger-get, meanful改成meaningful。

Answer 4

1、This is my first time to write an English e- mail.
is→was
2、I came across your maganize about two months before and I loved it from the firest moment。
before→ago
3、After the school I ran to but it
删除the，but→buy.................
4、So far I bought two issues................
bought→has bought
5、 I like every editor in you magazine
in→of
6、Learning with them always make me happy
make→makes
7、Next month I will challenge me to read an advanced magazine
me →myself

Answer 5

maganize-magazine
before-ago
firest -first
After the school中the去掉
but-buy
make-makes
challenge me 中Me去掉
read 前面加个and
ger through - spend
meanful-meaningful