短文改错(共10处) 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

I like my new Chinese teacher Mr Liu very much,whom gives lessons in a special way.When I was on junior school,my Chinese teacher repeated everything writing in the books.But Mr Liu was different.He tells us interested stories,which helps us learn better.Mr Liu doesn't look seriously,but no students talk in his class.Everyone listens him very carefully.He even hangs out with us after class.He is like the friend of ours.I'm so happy that I've such a good teacher.Now I like learning with Chinese very much and I'm sure I'll learn them well.
在线等,,回答全的再加分

1.whom——who指代Mr Liu,作从句主语,应用主格
2.on junior school中的on——in
3.writing——written,相当于everything which was written in the books
4.Mr Liu was different中的was——is。有上下文可判断Mr Liu是现在的老师,描述应用现在时态。
5.interested —— interesting 意为“有趣的”。 interested 意为“(某人对某事物)感兴趣的”
helps——help,此处which指代前面先行词stories,是可数名词复数,因而谓语在数上要与其一致不用第三人称单数
6.seriously——serious,此处的look用作系动词,后接形容词做表语,意为“看上去很严肃”。look后接副词时则用作行为动词,变成“严肃地看”
7.listens——listens to listen为不及物动词,不能直接接宾语,需要加to
8.the friend of ours中的the——a 此处不特指
9.like learning with Chinese——去掉with。with表工具、手段,此处的Chinese直接作为learn的宾语而不是手段。
10.them——it指代Chinese,为不可数名词追问

11个了,,的确错了那么多么

追答

有11个,序号标错了。。。从语法上分析确实有这么多

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第1个回答  2011-09-24
I like my new Chinese teacher Mr Liu very much,whom(who) gives lessons in a special way.When I was on(in) junior school,my Chinese teacher repeated everything writing(written) in the books.But Mr Liu was different.He tells us interested(interesting) stories,which helps(help) us learn better.Mr Liu doesn't look seriously(serious),but no students talk in his class.Everyone listens (加介词to)him very carefully.He even hangs out with us after class.He is like the(a) friend of ours.I'm so happy that I've such a good teacher.Now I like learning with (删除with)Chinese very much and I'm sure I'll learn them(it) well.

括号前的单词有误,括号内为正确答案
第2个回答  2011-09-24
1.whom---who 2.on--in 3.writing --written 4.was--is 5.interested --interesting 6.seriously--serious 7.listens 后加to 8.the --a 9. 去掉with 10.them--it
第3个回答  2011-09-24
whom-who was-is insterested-interesting helps-help seriously-serious no students-not any student is like-likes I've-I have with去掉 them-it
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