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我2007年毕业于A大学B专业,获得了经济学学士学位。2007年7月到2010年9月在C公司做采购工作,期间工作得到领导和同事的认可,并且这份工作让我学到很多很多,我很感激这份工作。后来因为个人发展原因,去了D公司,负责品牌管理工作,在我的努力工作下,品牌不断发展壮大,业绩也是有目共睹。最近在智联招聘上看到贵公司的招聘广告,对贵公司提供的职位很感兴趣,是我向往的,希望我可以通过考验,成为贵公司的一员。
以前的工作仅仅是用英文的邮件沟通,很少有机会英文口语表达,所以我的英文口语水平很一般,但是工作需要,我会努力学习,避免影响工作的沟通。

I graduated from A university majored in B and my bachelor of economics was completed. During July 2007 and September 2010, I got a job in C company dealing with purchases and I was approved by colleagues and leaders during the period,from which I learned much and it deserve my appreciation. I went to D company for my personal career reason,charging brand management. For my hard work, our brand thrived step by step, achievement was obvious to all.I saw your want ad,recently on website Zhaopin,which is my perfect pursuing and I'm interested in the job provided and I hope that I can pass all tests to become a staff of your company.
I didn't speak English frequently,because I only communicated with others through E-mail in my previous jobs, so my oral is just so so.But I will make efforts to learn English well,because of the requirement of my job to avoid communication barriers during my work.

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第1个回答  2011-03-09
In 2007 I graduated from University A major in B, received a BA degree in Economics.
recognized by leaders and colleagues while working there, so I learned a lot from that job, I am very appreciated for the job.
Later on, because for personal reasons, went to D Company, responsible for brand management, under my hard work, the brand has grown in strength, performance is obvious.
Recently see your company's recruitment advertising in Chie Len Recruitment, position of your company are interested in is my desire and hope I can pass the test and become a member of your company.
In my previous job communicate only through by mail in English, rarely have the opportunity to speak English to expression, that why my English is not that fluent, but the work needs, I will study hard, to avoid affecting the job's communication.
第2个回答  2011-03-09
i am graduated from A university of B major with B.E. i worked for C company from july 2007 to Sep.2010 as a buyer, during this time i learned a lot and recognized by leaders and colleagues, i quite appreciate this job. because career plan, I went to D company and was responsible for Brand management, per my hard working and persistent effort, the brand grow fast, everyone notices its swift development. recently, i saw your ads of recruitment, which qute intrigues me a lot, it's what i yearn for, thus, i hope i could through the interview and be part of your company .
former work mainly is communicated by mail, i got less chance to express in english, so my oral english is intermediary, if the job requires better oral english, i will learn it at my 100% effort to avoid misundstanding while working.
第3个回答  2011-03-09
i was grantuated from a uni, b is my major. ive got degree of economic. worked as supply purchasing guy in c co. from july 2007 to september 2010, and well recognized by manager and mates. ive learnd alot from previous job, and really appreciate it. then coz by personal reason, i went joined the D co., was in charge of brand management, with my effort, the brand kept growing healthy, performance was quite well known. resently saw the the hiring info., got very interesting in the poisition which you offering. hoping i can pass the interview, and be part of the company.
previously job was only Eng letter cummunication, not many chances for oral. so my Eng isnt that good, but if the position required, i would improve it, prevent barrier of cummunication.
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