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《阿乔的N次婚恋》

一 、从头说起

故事发生在东北某市。光阴飞快,一晃就是20余年了。我们都已经长大成人。
我叫贺东,大伙都叫我“阿东”,视足球为最爱。数年前结婚的,爱人叫“彤彤”,对我很好,还给我生了个儿子,叫“琳琳”,家人其乐融融。我发自内心感谢他对贺家做出的贡献,“女人确实很伟大!”。

儿时发小,乔洪峰,都叫他”阿乔”,长的帅气,外形冷俊,酷爱篮球,尤其是百米飞快,和他这么多年,发现只要他在百米跑道,冠军就没旁落过。属于运动型的帅哥吧。

人生没有我俩这么巧合的了,按出生年月日,我正好比他大一个月,自然我是大哥了,从小到大我们一直在一起念书,就连大学都是在同一体育学院念的。
小的时候我和阿乔住在同一大杂院的,我家和他家只是隔着一到墙而已,偶尔他家的山楂成熟了就伸到我家院了,那时的我很好吃的,也不见外的摘了几个,阿乔也知道的,毕竟是好朋友,见面就说我“小馋猫”,也不怕吃拉肚了。

由于我的祖父早年是开买卖的,家中有些积蓄,所以父母就在学校近买了个40多平米的房子,虽然现在看起来很小的,但在当时就令很多人羡慕了。这样我就不得不和阿乔暂时分开了,原先的老房子也没闲着,父母把它对外出租了。每月的租金又是比笔很好的收入的。

一晃几年过去了,原先的大杂院面临着拆迁,为了扩建绿化,市政府采取了给予一定补偿的政策。这样,我家也得到了补偿。而阿乔家也用这笔钱买了处小房子,过的也算惬意的。

可能我父母天生继承了祖父的经商头脑,他们也立刻拿补偿金和家中原有的 资金买了个门脸又开始第二次投资。房子也是出租,因为他们业已尝到了甜头。

九年义务教育转眼就完成了她的历史使命,我和阿乔很顺利的完成了人生的基础教育阶段,这样,学习成绩同样优异的我们考取了高中。巧合的是,那年分班我俩又分到了一起。“真是命运的安排啊!”

只是在高中的时候,阿乔的腿伤了,不得不休学一年,而在他休学的一年中,班中又转来了一个女生,长的很漂亮,人称“菲儿”,真是名如其人啊,那时的我,由于和她不熟悉,基本没有太多的话,后来知道她就住在我家后楼,一来二去就熟悉了。交谈中,得知,她只是在这学一年的课程,先暂住她姨妈家,她父母的关系还在大连,还要回那考大学的。一年后,“菲儿”远走大连,离开了喜欢她的朋友,同学。

而此时的阿乔,在养伤的同时,没放弃学业,在三年级开学时,他竟然来学校上课了,这简直又是个奇迹。阿乔偶尔也听同学们讲起二年级的故事,也隐隐约约的听说了有个叫“菲儿”的女孩子,但也只是一听一过,根本也没想到,日后他们还会发生什么故事。

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第1个回答  2007-03-28
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The story occurrence is in the northeast some city.The time is quick, the in a flash is more than 20 years.We all have already grow up person.
I call east of he , the everyones all call I" east of 阿 ", treat football as to love most.The few year ago get married of, the lover call" the 彤彤 ", like very much to me, return to born a son for me, call" the 琳琳 ", family its joy melt.I deliver to thank him from the heart to a contribution that does," the woman is really very great!".

The childhood years deliver small, Joe the 洪峰 , call he" 阿 Joe", long and handsome, cold 俊 of shape, cool love basketball, is 100 meters particularly quick, and he so many year, the detection wants ~only him in 100 meters runway, the champion did not fall beside.Belong to the handsome boy of the sport type.

The life have no my a pair so and strangely fits of, press date of birth, I at the right moment a bigger than him month, nature I am an eldest brother, we have been studying together since the childhood, even the universities are all in same athletics college to read aloud.
Small time I and 阿 Joe lives in same big and miscellaneous hospital of, my house and his house just that across on going to the wall, occasionally the hawthorn of his house is mature stretch my house hospital, that time of I am very delicious of, also disappear the outside of took off severals, 阿 Joe also know of, is a good friend after all, meet and then say me" small cat of 馋 ", also not afraid ate to pull the belly.

Because my grandfather's early years is to open the business, some savingses of in home, so the parents were near to buy 40 many houses of even rice of at school, although look now pimping, at that time even if the many people envied.Thus I can not on bed terms 阿 Joe temporarily separated, the at first old house also didn't be carefree, the parents rented outward it.The rental of every month is the better than pen income again of.

In a flash several years passed by, the at first big and miscellaneous hospital faces to dismantle to move, for the sake of the extension green turn, the city hall adopts to give certain in expiation of of policy.Thus, my house also got the repair.And Joe's house of 阿 also bought a small house with this money, leading also on the whole pleasing.

Possible my parents inheritted the grandfather to go into business the brains naturally, they also immediately took the original funds of compensation and in homes to buy a face starts again to invest for the second time.The house is also a rent, because they tasted the sweetener already.

The compulsory education of nine years turns the history mission that the eye completed her, I completed the foundation education stage of the life with the 阿 what Joe come right, thus, the study result same is excellent we pass in examination the senior high school.Strangely fits of is, the that year divide a my a pair divided again together." Is really the arrangement of the destiny!"

Just time in senior high school, the 阿 Joe's leg harmed, have to drop out a year, but in a year that he drop out, turned to come a girl again in the class, long very beautiful, the person call" son of 菲 ", is really a such as its person, that time of I, because of acquainting with with her not, basic have no too many words, know that she live afterwards after I house building, on come two go to and then acquainted with.In the confabulation, know, she is just here to learn the course for a year, residing temporarily her mama's house of 姨 first, her parents' relation is still in Dalian, still needing to return that to test the university.An after year," son of 菲 " walks as far as Dalian, left to like her friend, classmate.

But at this time of 阿 Joe, at the time of keeping to harm, did not give up the education, at the grade three school begins, he came to school to have a class unexpectedly, this simply is a miracle again.Joe of the 阿 occasionally also hears the story that the classmates speak to rise the grade two, also unclear invite to invite of hearing and have call" son of 菲 " of girl's son, but also just on hear on lead, the root also has never thought, they will still take place in the days to come what story.

The story takes place in the northeast city. Dizzying time, a flash is more than 20 years. We are all grown. My name is Dong-and would call me, "Adong" As for love football. A few years ago marriage, the wife called "Tongtong" very nice to me, giving me had had a son, named "Lin-lin," happy family. 夏 my heartfelt thanks to him for the contribution it has made, "women are indeed very great! . " Small childhood development, Qiao peak calls him "Aqiao" a long handsome appearance Wild, love basketball, especially 100 meters quickly. and his so many years, when he found the 100-meter track champion no wanes over. Is a handsome guy-bar movement. Life not so coincidentally, today, by 238, he is just one month, I was naturally a big brother. We have been together from small to big school, but the University College in the same sports. Eqiao small when I lived in the same hodgepodge house, and my family and his family is only separated by one to the wall. He's a mature hawthorn occasionally on the House anytime my family, then I eat well, not a few outside the Abstract, Eqiao knows, after all, is a good friend, I met said "small Chanmao" is not afraid of the food chains. Because my grandfather was opened early trading, and some savings at home, Therefore, in schools near their parents bought a house more than 40 square meters, now looks very small, But at a time when a lot of people envy. A Qiao and so I had to temporarily split, the original old houses are not idle either, letting a foreign parents it. The monthly rent is more than the sum of good income. Flash, a few years later, faced with the original hodgepodge house demolition, in order to expand green The municipal government adopted a policy to give some compensation. Thus, my family has been compensated. Ah Jia and the Department also used the cash to buy a small house off counted as a prerequisite. My parents may inherit a grandfather born business-minded, they immediately take the compensation funds buying a home was originally listed facade began the second investment. The house is rented, because they have already tasted the sweetness. After completing her nine-year compulsory education in the historic mission of my life and Aqiao smoothly completed the stage of basic education. Thus, we obtain a high school equally outstanding. Coincidentally, that year also assigned to classes of us together. "The arrangement is destiny!" Only in high school when Aqiao the wounded leg, had to go back to 2001. He stayed in the year, the class moved to a female, long and very pretty, nicknamed "IFIR" if the person who is ah, then I, and she was not familiar with basic little, Later she lived in my home floor, they will be familiar with the one to two. Conversations, I have learned that she has only one year of courses in this first refuge her aunt, and her parents still in the relationship between Dalian, That goes back to the university. A year later, "IFIR" distant Dalian, like her friend left the students. And now the Aqiao, recuperate at the same time not abandon their studies in the third grade, he was going to school. This is simply a miracle. Eqiao occasionally listen to the story of second-year students abroad, even whispered heard married to the "IFIR" girl But they will only hear one, and they are never expected that the story of what happened in the future they will.
第2个回答  2007-04-01
A-Qiao's Nth Love Affairs

1. From the beginning

The story took place in a North-eastern city. How time flies! It’s already been 20 years, and we’ve all grown up.
My name is He Dong, friends call me “A-Dong”, I’m a football fanatic. I got married a couple of years ago to a wonderful woman named “Tongtong”. We have a son, named “Linlin”. We’re a happy family and I am truly grateful for the sacrifices my wife had made for this family, “Women are truly selfless!”.

My best friend from childhood is Qiao Hongfeng, we all call him “A-Qiao”. He was a handsome, cool-looking boy, he loved basketball. He was especially good at the 100-metre sprint, after knowing him for so many years, I’ve never seen him lose on the hundred metre track. I guess he belongs to the hunky athletic type.

You won’t find coincidences like us anywhere else. I’m exactly one month older than him (making me the Elder brother), we studied in the same schools since we were little, we even went to the same sports college at university!

We lived in the same neighbourhood when we were young, our houses were only separated by a wall. Sometimes when the berries from his hawthorn tree were ripe, I’d pick some when no one’s around. A-Qiao knew about it since we were good friends, he’d call me a “hungry kitten” whenever he saw me, and teased me about getting stomach-aches.

Since my grandfather owned a shop in the early years, my family had some money, my parents bought a 40 square metre house near my school. It seems small now, but it was many people’s envy at the time. So I was forced to leave A-Qiao. The old family house wasn’t left idle either, my parents rented it out. The rent was another good source of monthly income.

A few years passed by, the old house was going to be demolished to make way for a park. The government had a compensation policy. My family were compensated also. A-Qiao’s family bought a small house with the money and lived quite comfortably.

Maybe my parents inherited my grandfather’s business acumen, they immediately invested in another shop with the compensation and some old savings. They rented our house out again, since they already had a taste for it.

The nine years of compulsory schooling was soon coming to an end, and A-Qiao and I successfully completed life’s first hurdle. With the same good results, we both made it into senior high school, and coincidentally, we were placed in the same class again. “It must have been fate!”

A-Qiao accidentally injured his leg in senior high, and he was forced to stay home for the year. A new girl was transferred to our class, she was really pretty, people call her “Fei-er” – a name as beautiful as herself. I didn’t talk to her in the beginning since I didn’t know her very well, but then I discovered she lived just behind us, and we soon became friends. She told me she’s only staying for the year, as she’s currently living with her aunt. Her parents still live in Dalian, and she has to go back and attend university there. A year later, “Fei-er” went to Dalian, and left behind the friends and classmates who adored her.

A-Qiao didn’t give up his school work while his leg healed. On the first day of the third year of senior high school, we were amazed to see him show up at school, it was a miracle! He had heard stories from the second year, and vaguely knew there was a girl called “Fei-er”, he didn’t pay any attention to it at the time, but there was no way he could predict what had awaited them next.本回答被提问者采纳
第3个回答  2007-03-28
Love Stories of AQiao

Start from the Beginning

The story takes place in a northeastern city. Time passes swiftly with 20 years running by. We are now grown-ups!

My name is He Dong, but people usually call me A dong. I am a football fan. I married a girl named Tong Tong several years ago, and she is nice to me. My wife gave birth to my little daughter soon after, and I named her Lin Lin. A happy family, you must admit. I really appreciate what my wife has done to the family. “Women are great,” I told myself.

Hong Qiaofeng is my pal since childhood, and people often called him Aqiao. Handsome and cool he is, he is also a good basketball player. He is particularly talented in 100m race, and I had never seen him loose a single 100m race throughout my life. Just imagine, a handsome and strong guy.

Life is a wonderful thing, and he was born a month ahead of me. So he became the big brother. We attended the same schools, including the sports college.

My family and his family lived in the same courtyard when we were kids, and we are neighbors separated by a single wall. When the hawthorn in his courtyard got ripe, I often stole it from the side of my yard. Aqiao knew this clearly, but he was my best friend anyway. He laughed at me as “a little gluttonous cat”, but he also worried that yet-to-ripe hawthorn may hurt my stomach.

My grandpa used to be a businessman, for which my family was relatively rich. My parents decided to buy a 40-sq-m apartment near the school years ago, it may be nothing by modern terms, but it was a lovely house by that time. Therefore, I left Aqiao. The old house was rented out by my parents, bringing a new source of handsome income for my family.

Several years on, the old courtyard would be demolished to make room for municipal gardening project, and the government offered certain compensation for dwellers. Both my family and Aqiao’s got a certain amount of money, and Aqiao used the money for a small house – a not-so-bad life.

My parents are wise as my grandfather in business, and they invested all the government compensation into a store, which was rented out again for stable rent income.

The nine-year compulsory education finished quickly. I and Aqiao were enrolled in the same high school as we shared the similar outstanding performance. Coincidentally, I and Aqiao became classmates in the high school – a fate could only be arranged by the God!

Aqiao hurt his leg in high school and was absent from school for a year. When he was at home, a lovely girl joined our class, a really beautiful girl with a beautiful name of Fei. I did not know her at that time, but later I knew she lived in the next building to mine, and I gradually became her friend. In conversation, I knew she was in my class for only one year because she was just lived in the city temporarily with her aunt. Her parents were in Dalian, and she would be back to Dalian to take the college entrance examination. A year later, Fei left us for Dalian, leaving her loved friends and classmates behind.

Aqiao, meanwhile, did not give up his study while he was at home, and he returned to school for Grade 3. A miracle, I thought. Accidentally, Aqiao would heard stories of the last year and the name of Fei, but he had no idea what would happen between them several years later.
第4个回答  2007-04-08
Qiao's N Blind Dates

The story took place at one of the cities
In the northeast of China.
Time flies.
It's over twenty years since <we came into the world.

I'm He Dong, nicknamed " A Dong" .
My favourite sport is soccer.
I have been married for three years.
My wife is “Tong Tong," who is helpful to me.
She’ s also kind to our son ,
"Lin Lin,” who was born on May 1,1995.
We are a happy family.
I am thankful to her for what she has done for us
From the bottom of my heart.
Women are wonderful,
Who support half of the sky.

One of my best pals in my childhood is
Qiao Hongfeng,
Whom other people call "A Qiao".
He is a tall, thin and good-looking boy,
Being crazy about basketball,
And especially being good at running.

As his best friend,
I have found out that he is the champion
Every time he appears on the track for the 100-meter race>.
What he has done is so cool!

What a coincidence !
<After comparing the dates> when we were born,
I <was happy to know I was> one month older than he .
So, I was his older brother
From childhood to adulthood,
We <studied> together.
<At last>, we entered the same college <of physical education>.

A Qiao lived with me in a big courtyard,
"Da za yuan" in <Chinese>.
We were next-door neighbors.
When <their> hawthorn tree <bore fruits>,
<And presented some over the fence to us>,
I <would gladly accept them>.
<Though he knew what I did to his fruits,
He made no complaint about that.>
<However, he took advantage of the incident
And made fun of me
By calling me “Greedy Kitten”.>

Having been running the business in the old years,
my grandfather had lots of money.
So my parents bought a house near the school,
which was 40 square meters .
though seen nowadays, it is so small.
it's still envied by many people ,
who are our friends that got to know us well.
So A Qiao and I were not nighbours.
The old house was put out to lease instead of leaving unused.
We got more money every month .

Having been running the business in the old years,
My grandfather had lots of money.
So my parents bought a house near the school,
Which was 40 square meters.
Though nowadays it is so small,
Then it was envied by many people
<Who got to know us well>.
So A Qiao and I were <separated>.
The old house was rented instead of <being deserted>.
We got <some money from it> every month .

Many years <have> passed,
And the old <group of> houses,
Which is called “Da za yuan”,
<Is to be torn down>.
<To allot more space for flowers and trees>,
The government <took some steps>
To make up for the loss of the old houses.
So my family <obtained> a large <sum>,
And A Qiao's parents spent this money on a small house.
We are all living happily.

My parents have the same brains
As my grandfather,
<Who was> good at <doing> business.
They invested all the money in a new apartment,
Which is rent to other people.
It's good for them to make a living <this> way.

The nine yeas of free education
finished her task of history in a short time.
A Qiao and I all did a good job,
we take examination easily.
By coincidence,
we were classed together as degrees.
It's lucky for us.

When he was in senior two,
one of his legs was broken.
so he had to stay at home
for keeping his leg better for one year.
In this year, a girl, who is beautiful,
transfered our class.At that time ,
I did not get to know her well.
no titles to talk about.
maybe about a few months later,
I knew that she lived at the back of my house,
which it was not far from me.
then we became friends.
in chat,i knew that,
she is from Da Lian.
only learnt one year's course,
who was living with her aunt's home at the moment,
after finish this course,
she would come back.
time flies, one year past,
she left the city for Da Lian,
saying goodby to all pals
who always helped her when she was in trouble.

At the same time,
A Qiao kept his leg healed,
not giving up his study.
At the beginning of the third year of school,
it's a miracle that
he came back to class again surprisingly.
Unintentionally,
A Qiao,
had been heard of a stroy
of the senior 2 of school by his classmates,
which is a girl called "Fei Er".
to him,
it's only a old story,
which is not interesting to him !
he did not think of what happened to them !

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