rich 的比较级的确是 richer 不用 more rich
第一段话用个排比句比较好
I hope my family become richer, my parents' work get better, and I study better, and all my family have a good health. And wish my teachers have a good health too and be happy!
第二段,句子译的越短越好,因为定语从句应该还没学到
My bedroom was small and old before, the only things are a mini bed and mini desk. But my bedroom getting bigger now, clean and bright, with a really big bed and desk, also a beautiful wardrobe. There are lots of beautiful pictures decorate on the wall. I very much like my bedroom now!
追问谢谢!