英语作文 我写好了汉语 谁帮我翻译成英语 拜托了

你好吗? 我听说你在美国学会了吸烟,这使我对你很担心 , 不知道你为什么会吸烟,因为吸烟对人的身体有很大的危害。
烟里面有很多的有害成分,会使你渐渐成瘾,对身体也有很大的危害,这会使你不能认真的上学,你的父母也很担心,而且吸烟也会对你身边的人带来危害,很浪费金钱。所以应该把烟戒掉。
戒烟的方法有很多,你可以尝试去听音乐,购物,来分散你的注意力,以帮助你戒烟。我希望你能早日戒烟成功。

那个英语好的救救我吧?不然就死定了 我把我所有的财富都贡献出来了。拜托你们了。

How are you, my friend?
I’ve heard that you picked up smoking in America, which worried me a lot. I don’t understand why you began to smoke because smoke is badly harmful to human beings.
There are a lot of poisonous chemicals in tobacco, some of which could make you get addicted to smoking, some of which do great harm to your body. Smoking will make you not be serious enough to your study. And your parents will worry about you, too. What’s more, smoking may do harm to the people around you, and waste you a lot of money.
So, you should try your best to quit smoking. There many effective ways to quit smoking. You could try to listen to the music or to go shopping to distract your attention. I really hop you could give up smoking in the near soon.
细节的地方为了符合英语习惯添加了一些修饰成分
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第1个回答  2011-07-05
How are you? I heard you were in America learned to smoke, it makes me very worried to you. I do not know why are you smoking, for smoking does a great harm on the human body .

There are a lot of harmful components of cigarette,which will make you gradually addiction, the body also has a great harm, it will make you can not study serious, your parents are worried, also smoking will bring harm to the people around you, is a waste of money. So you should give up smoking.

There have a lot of ways to give up smoking, you can try to listen to music, shopping, to distract you, to help you not smoking. I hope you will be able to successfully as soon as possible.本回答被提问者采纳
第2个回答  2011-07-05
How are you? I heard you in the United States learned to smoking, I to you are worried, I don't know why you're smoking, because smoking to the person's body has great harm.

Smoke there are a lot of harmful ingredients, can make you gradually addiction to the body, there is great harm, this will make you can't serious school, your parents were worried about, and smoking will also to the people around you bring harm, is a waste of money. So should give up smoking.

There are many ways to stop smoking, you can try to listen to music, shopping, to distract your attention, in order to help you to give up smoking. I hope you will soon successfully quit smoking. (我的翻译和上面的不一样)
第3个回答  2011-07-05
How are you? I’ve heard that you learned smoking in America and it worries me a lot. I don’t know exactly why you are smoking because it’s do harm to people’ health.
Cigarette contains lots of hazardous substances so that you will be addicted with it. Besides, you cannot concentrate on your study because smoking hurts your body which worries your parents a lot. Moreover, smoking is also harmful to people around you, and it wastes your money too. So I suppose you should quit it.
There are many ways to quit smoking. You could try to listen to music and go shopping to distraction. I hope you could quit it successfully as soon as possible.
第4个回答  2011-07-05
How are you?
I’ve heard that you picked up smoking in America, which made me worried a lot . I wonder why you get down to smoking since it is badly harmful to bodies.
There are a lot of poisonous chemicals in tobacco, some of which could make you get slid into
addiction.What's worse, some of those can do great harm to your body. Smoking can also make you not be serious enough about your study. Besides, your parents will worry about you.Smoking may not only do harm to the people around you, but also waste you a lot of money.
Therefore, you should try your best to quit smoking. There are lots of effective ways to quit smoking. You can attempt to listen to the music or to do some shopping to distract your attention,which can help you get out of smoking.I really hope that you can succeed in giveing up smoking as soon as possible.