英语老师请进，这是初三的英语作文，你会打几分？满分：15

Question

Everybody needs love. It is important of people. When I was a kid, my parents were busy with them job. So I always feel Lonely. But friend was changed my life! When I start to go to school, I miss my parents, so I can not help crying. When the Victor show up, I also feel sad. He told jokes with me, and play game with me. So I changed a lot, I become an outgoing boy. Thank you, friend! I will remember the friendship forever.
打 完分，说说为什么？用中考标准

Answer 1

我觉得这篇文章的大概意思是：每个人都需要爱。它是重要的人。当我还是个小孩的时候,我的父母都在忙他们的工作。所以我总是感到孤单。但朋友是改变了我的生活!当我开始上学,我想念我的父母,我不禁哭了起来。当维克多出现,我也感到很伤心。他跟我讲笑话,跟我玩游戏。所以我改变了很多,我成为了一个外向的男孩。谢谢你,朋友!我将记住友谊地久天长。按中考的标准，这篇文章稍微短了一些，内容还好，一般般吧！大概10分吧！不过前面的同学，这篇文章可以不用过去式。

Answer 2

大写的都是正确的。
It is important FOR people
my parents were busy with THEIR job.
So I always FELT lonely
But MY friend HAD changed my life
……
天哪后面都应该是过去式，错误太多。哪里是初三的水平！

Answer 3

9分，字数太少，思绪混乱，上面写的是父母亲，为什么下面就跟朋友扯上了，还有题目是什么，谁知道你有没有跑题啊

Answer 4

应该可以给个12分吧。

Answer 5

12