英语短文改错。(下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词)

What should you do when your parents become angrily? If your parents got mad, try to have a conversation with them about it. Remembering not to shout at them. They usually will try to change. But they will take some times to change because they always get angry, and that is all they know. You might have to change for your method a couple of times. Do any nice things for your parents that they don’t expect — like cooking, doing the dishes, washing clothes, or clean the floors. If this doesn’t work, bring in friend that you feel comfortable, and have him or her help you.

become angrily:become angry
got mad:get mad
Remembering:Remember
take some times:take some time
change for your method:去掉for
Do any nice things:Do some nice things
clean the floors:cleaning the floors
If this doesn’t work: If that doesn’t work
bring in friend:去掉in
that you feel comfortable:that you feel comfortable with
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第1个回答  2011-06-05
1.angrily---angry
2.got mad--- went mad
3. try to have a conversation with them,不要about it
4&5. remember, do not shout to them
6.they usually try to change.
7&8.but they might take some time . will---might, some times---some time
9.change your method 不要for
10. do any nice things ---do some nice things
11.doing the dishes----washing dishes
12.clean the floors---cleaning the floors
13. have him or her TO help you
第2个回答  2011-06-05
What should you do when your parents become angry? If your parents got mad, try to have a conversation with them about it. Remembering not to shout at them. They usually try to change. But they will take some times to change because they always get angry, and that is all what they know. You might have to change for your methods a couple of times. Do any nice things for your parents that they do expect — like cooking, doing the dishes, washing clothes, or cleaning the floors. If this doesn’t work, bring in friends that make you feel comfortable, and have him or her help you.
第3个回答  2011-06-05
angry tried Remember 去掉 will thing cleaning 去掉 don’t追问

才7个啊

第4个回答  2011-06-05
1angry 2 Remember(祈使句不用ing)3 time 4 change your method 5 cleaning6all that
7some nice things 8expect,like9making the dishes 10have 可以换成let ,or 用turn to them for help 更好,have为使役,此处用不太好