【紧急求助】短文改错：共有10处错误，每句最多有2处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、修改、删除。

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短文改错：共有10处错误，每句最多有2处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、修改、删除。Although life in the future is ，difficult to predict , but we can still examine some of it’s major trends in the contemporary world . Transportation will become clean , faster and safer . The vehicles will pollute the environment . Helping by acomputer system , people will travel at an amazing speed . Business wont be as usual in the future . The Internet will play a important role and the shopping will become a form of entertainment . People in the future will able to enjoy a longer , healthier and more active lied . In the future , it will be more “schools on the air” and even“e - schools” . Instead of being students only when we were young , we will become lifelong learner .

Answer 1

the future is ，（去掉逗号）difficult to predict , but we can still examine some of it’s （改为its)major trends in the contemporary world . Transportation will become clean , faster and safer . The vehicles will(加上否定词not, 或者否定词组no longer)pollute the environment . Helping(改为helped) by acomputer system , people will travel at an amazing speed . Business wont(改为won't) be as usual in the future . The Internet will play a（改为an) important role and the shopping will become a form of entertainment . People in the future will able to enjoy a longer , healthier and more active lied(改为life) . In the future , it (改为there)will be more “schools on the air” and even“e - schools” . Instead of being students only when we were （改为are)young , we will become lifelong learner(改为learners) .

Answer 2

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Although life in the future is ，difficult to BE predictED , but we can still examine some of it’s major trends in the contemporary world . Transportation will become cleanER , faster and safer . The vehicles will pollute the environment . Helping by THE computer system , people will travel at an amazing speed . Business won'T be as usual in the future . The Internet will play aN important role and the shopping will become a form of entertainment . People in the future will BE able to enjoy a longer , healthier and more active LIVES . In the future , THERE will be more “schools on the air” and even“e - schools” . Instead of being students only when we ARE young , we will become lifelong learner .

Answer 3

修改如下：Although life in the future is difficult to predict , we can still examine some of its major trends in the contemporary world . Transportation will become cleaner , faster and safer . The vehicles will not pollute the environment . Helped by acomputer system , people will travel at an amazing speed . Business won't be as usual in the future . The Internet will play an important role and the shopping will become a form of entertainment . People in the future will be able to enjoy a longer , healthier and more active life . In the future , there will be more “schools on the air” and even“e - schools” . Instead of being students only when we are young , we will become lifelong learners .