请高手帮忙写英语作文

Question

题目是Mars life
很急，在线等待

Answer 1

The future life on Mars
What will our life be like on Mars in the future?
With the rapid development of hi-tech, the Mars will change a lot in many ways in the future.
We'll completely live in the cyberspace.
First, we find the Mars haven't been polluted. Air and water becomes more tidy and fresh than
our earth. Second, if we want, we can study in the spaceship. And people don't need to go to the
factory to work, instead of working by computer at home. On the other hand, it is very easy for us
to visit the Earth and other stars by riding spaceship.
I hope all this can come true. But first, we must treasure and protect Mars and avoid it becoming
another polluted earth.If all of us try our best to do it, we will enjoy our life.

Answer 2

自己动手写，让别人写，你的水平永远是这样原地踏步，我们是过来人，很明白着其中的道理，别人写的东西永远是别人的，自己写的，不管是好是坏，都是自己的经验与积累，希望你能好好锻炼自己，这样你的水平才会提高，作文才会拿高分，你平时可以扩大自己的词汇量，摘抄一些优美的句子，可以用在作文上，也可以去查阅字典，看看每个词语的各种用法，一定要靠自己，记住！