2007年高考英语读写任务题品读
一、试题：第二节 读写任务(共l小题，满分25分)
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Dear Ari,
As you sleep in my arms, I'm amazed at how light you feel. I stare at your tiny body, so fragile that a sudden wind could lift you up into the air. I love this feeling of protecting you and dreaming of all I have in store for you.
I intend to bring you up to be brave and successful in an often difficult society. That's why your mommy and I have named you Ari, which means "lion". It's our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others.
Before you came into the world, we had spent months imagining what you'd be like. Would you be a boy or a girl? Would you look like Mommy, Daddy or your elder brothers? Anyway, we would find out soon.
Finally your mother's labor came. And several hours later, we met the first time. I held you high up in the air. I then was able to cut your umbilical cord (脐带) and put you in your mother's arms. She still had enough energy to radiate the love while she pressed you to her face.
And here we are tonight. As I hold you close, you sleep so peacefully. I press my ear to your chest and hear your strength. I am listening to the first beats of a lion's heart. Welcome to the world, Ari.
Love,
Daddy
[写作内容]
假设你就是信中的Ari，父亲在你出生的时候写了这封信。今天是父亲50岁生日，你准备以写信的方式，祝贺他的生日。以下是信的内容(信的开头和结尾已经为你写好)：
1．以约30个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望；
2．以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩，并包括如下要点：
(1)读信后的感受；
(2)以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受；
(3)表达你对父亲的感激和祝福。
[写作要求]
1．作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接 引用原文中的句子；
2．信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。
二、评分标准
项目 分值 评分标准
概括 5 按照要求概括了全部主要信息, 没有增加与原文无关的信息, 没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。
4 基本按照要求概括了主要信息, 没有增加与原文无关的信息, 没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。
3 基本按照要求概括了主要信息, 但包含一些不相关的信息, 有个别句子抄自原文。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。
2 不能按照要求概括主要信息, 包含较多不相关的信息, 有较多的抄袭原。语言结构不够正确，行文不够规范。
0---1 没有按照要求概括主要信息, 基本是不相关的信息, 大多数句子都照抄原文。语言结构不正确，行文不规范。
写作 18---20 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或较少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。
14---17 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。
11---13 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。
7---10 包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关。词汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。
4---6 只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄原文。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的句子出现语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。
1---3 只包含与题目所给要点内容有关的一些单词。主题不明确，文章基本照抄原文。词汇及其贫乏，基本不能正确用词。几乎没有正确的句子。篇章结构零乱。
0 以下几种情况，给0分：
1） 完全抄袭原文（或其它文章）
2） 文不对题
3） 只写一些零散的单词，完全没有表达完整的内容。
三、任务型写作评卷场评分细则
◆概括
1．完全不理解，照抄原文 0分
2．死板机械地抄，不改变原文顺序 1分
3．改变主语或宾语的抄为主 2 分 (灵活地抄)
4．稍为改动总体的抄 3分
5．改变句子、用词，重新排列组织 4—5分 (字数不特别要求)
◆120字自主写作
1．感想，语言，内容，连贯性
2．语言为主, 内容的相关部分，综合考虑连贯
3．首先看语言是否合格
4．内容： 读后的感受, 成长的感受, 感激和祝福
5．用了阅读理解中的素材不算抄袭
6．内容偏离的时候以语言为主
四、学生习作选评给分情况
1 ( 1+5=6分)
Dear Dad,
On this date of your 50th birthday, Mom gave me the letter. You wrote me when I was born 18 years ago. In your letter, you hope me up to successful and brave in society, and you named me is Ari, means strong and do well for myself, you wish I love you and Mommy.
I very love you and mother, because not only you and Mom love me, but also you do every think is due to me. When I was ill, you and Mom are very busy for me, give me best love. Now I was 18 years ago. I become a strong and can do well for myself. I think you for you and Mom. I’ll use my all love for you, but sorry, I didn’t can earn the money for you, because I have to study. So hope you wait me.
I wish you strong and healthy all the life.
2 ( 2+9=11分)
In you letter, Daddy, I know that you hope me grow strong and eager grasp. You love me, you give the best for me. You imagining I will be like a lion who is brave.
I felt very warm when I reading your letter. In my growing road you give me the best. When I in trouble, you give the help for me first. If I make mistake, you won’t angry for me, you only give me a warm love. In my life, you and Mum’s love is full of it. I can grow up without your love.
Happy birthday, Daddy. I won’t make you sad, I would be a brave and success lion while you hope me to be in the difficult society.
Thank you. Dad. I love you and Mum forever.
3 ( 0+13=13分)
In your letter, I know I was a lovely boy in your life, and I was know that lots of funny things happen before I was born.
In my living, I was happy and lucky, because I believe you on doing a lot things that make me happy. When I was young, you often tell strong to me, you often play games with me though you are very busy. When I was ill, you will take me to the hospital first, when I go to school, you often tell me to take care of myself and don’t break the traffic rude. After I guard from high school, you show me a lot of fresh things that I had never come through.
Words fails me to express my thankful to you. Now, I dust hope can live happily and have a strong body. What’s more, wish you will healthy forever.
4 ( 3+16=19分)
Dear Dad,
You encouraged me to be a brave and successful person. You were eager to see my good performances, which should be strong, seize every opportunity, do well for everybody. I keep your words on my mind and work hard all these years.
I’m totally moved by your words, my great father. I’m touched by your happiness, gave wishes and love in the letter.
Words fail to express how I appreciate you. I remember the day you taught me swimming. You put me into the centre of the swimming poor, just as if I were a brave lion and left me. I struggled to catch you but I couldn’t. You lifted me up a while and then back to water. I was able to swim that day and I was strong both physically and mentally. Thank you, Dad.
Today is your 50th birthday. I’m here to say, thank you, thank you for your love and sorrow. Thank you for the warmth and health. I can’t be here without you. I love you.
Wish you a happy birthday and happy all your life. Wish you in good health everyday. Happy birthday to you.
5 ( 5+18=23分)
In your letter, you wished me to be strong-minded and successful. You were looking forward seeing me tight for my future bravely and do well for myself and others.
After reading this letter, I feel quite shocked at your expectation on me. I also feel ashamed for not having performed well to meet your demand.
I still remember when I was in primary school, I failed to apply myself to studying. I was addicated to computer games. As a conseque I soon became the last one in my class. You didn’t abuse me at all. On the contrary, you teached me that studying was the most important object at the moment and encouraged me to study hard. Only when I have read your letter did I realize that I behaved so bad at that time and you were so sad to see I didn’t do well for myself.
I can’t help expressing my gratitude and sending my best wishes to you, wish you healthy and happy. I promise that I will spare no effort to satisfy you demand of being a brave and successful person.
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