这是我根据我和她的实际情况写的,以前没写过什么英文情书这次是第一次所以不想搞砸希望大家能够指出缺点比如说哪个用词不准确,哪个句子结构不对,哪里表达的不够清楚。指出并给出改正谢谢!!!回答的好再给50分!!!
I have no idea that from when I kind of had a crush on you.your way to speak,your way to smile,your way to deject are always caught by my eyes. I do not exactly know what kind of feelings it is,but I do realize that I want to see you,to hear your voice,to stay by your side,to share happiness and sorrows with you.I really want to try my best to let you know what I feel but my words was too plain and you know you deserve more..........
You may disappointed at what I did to you. Actually you may thought I did nothing to promote the relationship between you and me. I guess you never thought I cared about you. But,baby that was not true. I was just to proud to say it out cause I am not the kind to ever let my feelings show cause I thought being strong meant never losing my self control. Now i am conscious of i am wrong ,fall in love is so complicated that I do not know how to handle it . But this time I know to let my feelings go chasing the sense from the bottom of my heart, so tell me what can I do to make it up to you? It's really not easy for me to say that cause I never done that before. You are the first girl to whom I have the courage to put down my armor and express my real feelings.I remember when I vowed the vows, I also remember the ache in my heart when I saw the sadness in your eyes.Girl you should know what you have got,others can't steal it. No , they can not even feel it!
Last time when I saw you turn to leave chatting with your friends cheerfully . All of a sudden i almost feel that i will lose you if i don't take any further step to keep you by my side. When i walk home alone i know i need you more than to take a chance on losing you. It's been a long time coming for me and also for you,but i know it's been worth the wait.
Was what I say too much for you ? If it was i apologize. But if you feel what i feel trust your heart and i will take care of everything. Would you like to give me one more chance? Would you?
我不反对大家说垃圾或者狗屁不通之类的话,但要指出错在哪怎么改。象一楼那样的光知道冒充牛比的我不想再看到了老子把分扔水里也不会给他的,二楼三楼做的不错。老子不缺分回答的好再给100!