200分追加50分求英语翻译！急，在线等！

Question

请把下边一小段中文书信，翻译成英文，不要翻译器翻译，有小地方的语法错误没关系，时间紧张！

以下是：
亲爱的Bob
好久没有收到你的来信了，最近还好吗？新的一年又来到了，全国都洋溢着节日的气氛。
在过去的一年里，我最自豪的事考进了一所好的高中，开始了高中的学习，但对自己的学习成绩，态度也有所不满。这些都已经成为往事了，在新的一年里，我会一良好的学习尽头去迎接新学期的到来。

Answer 1

Dear Bob!
I haven't received your letter for a long time. How are you recently? The new year is coming, with the air of festival throughout the nation. Proudly, I attended a good senior high school in the last year and began my high school study. But I feel a little dissatisfied with my study mark. Though, all the things have been the past. In the coming year, I will face the new school term with a good attitude to study.

Answer 2

Beloved Bob is not having received your incoming letter for the a very long time , lately passable?
New 1 year has been arriving in , the whole nation has all been permeated with the festival
atmosphere. Within 1 year in the past, the thing that I am proud of most applies for the high
school who has entered one inclination , studying having started high school's, also discontents to
some extent but to self academic record , attitude. These have become all already past events,
before new lining for 1 year, I will be once fine studying end going to welcome the new school
term's arrival.

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Answer 3

Dear Bob,
It took long time before I received your letter. What's going on these days? The new year is coming again and the whole country is in a happy atmosphere.
In the past year, the most proud thing of mine was that I went into a key senior high school starting my life in it. Though I was not satisfied with my study and my attitude towards it, they all became the past. In the coming new year, I will do my best.

觉得自己的比较简练哈^^
一楼2楼绝对是机器翻译的。。。

Answer 4

Dear Bob,

I have not received your letter for a long time. How are you recently? It is going to be new year and the festive atmosphere is filled throughout the whole nation. Last year, i am very proud that i entered a great high for my studies. However, i am not satisfied with my grades and attitude.
In the new year, i will forget all unhappy stuffs and will be mantally prepared for the coming semester.

Answer 5

我是英语专业的。有些翻译如果只按字面翻译会产生歧义，就像一楼二楼的那样。所以做这种翻译的时候最好不要一个字一个字去翻，那只是中国式英语，老外看不懂的。
Dear Bob,

For a long time that I haven't heard from you .Is everything going on well ? The new year is comming,the whole city is immersed in a festival atmosphere.
During the last year,I was proud of being admitted to a famous high school and starting my new schoollife there.My studies need to be improved.However,all these are the past.
In this new year,i will work hard to prepare for the new semester.

yours,
某某

Answer 6

Dear Bob,
I haven't received your letter for a long time .How are you now?New Year is coming,and the whole country is laden with festival atmosphere.
During the last year,the proundest thing is thatI accessed in a good senior high school successfully,starting a new school life,but I'm not satisfied with my scores and attitude.No matter how,all this is past.I'll do my best to meet the new term in the new year.