请高手纠正一下英文部分的错误。

Question

中文部分：宜家是我经常去的一个商场，虽然对于我来说装修房子还是件遥遥无期的事，但是看看里面的样板房，规划一下以后自己的的
房子。也是件不错的事。买过很多宜家的小商品，收纳用品和厨房小商品都是很实用也很便宜。比起淘宝上的“义乌”小商品，质量还有保障。另外宜家的餐厅也是
很不错的，鸡翅10元两对，里面的甜点也不错，但是正餐就一般般了，多数都是二次加热的。以前工作日的时候还喜欢去曾宜家免费的会员咖啡喝，现在觉得晚上
喝咖啡影响睡眠，而宜家的咖啡豆质量还算不错的，喝了容易亢奋，影响晚上睡眠。 英文部分：IKEA
is a furniture mall which is I offen visited. Though decorating home is
a long future plan for me.But I also could feel exciting when I saw the
model houses in IKEA and make adesign in my heart. I have bought a lot
of IKEA small things like storagethings or kitchen things which is cheap
with high quality. Those things is moresafty than the same things
belong to Taobao. In another hand, IKEA restaurantis another good place
for eating or resting. You can got nice dessert (but alittle expensive)
or pay 10 yuan get a couple of wings (that's cheap), but tobe honest,
the meal in the restaurant is just soso, most of them are
second-hotfood. In the past time, I like to went to IKEA to get free
coffee in workday,but now, I just think dinner coffee in the night is
not a good way forsleeping. The coffee bean in IKEA is good so that's
mean it's more easily tofeel exciting and hard to sleeping in evening.

Answer 1

IKEA is a furniture mall which I often visit. Though decorating my home is
my plan only in the far future, I still feel excited and think up designs in my head everytime I see the model houses in IKEA. I have bought a lot of small things like storage furnitures or kitchenware which are cheap and of high quality. These are much safer purchases than those from the online store, Taobao. On another hand, the IKEA restaurant is a good place
for eating or resting. You can enjoy sweet desserts (although a little expensive)
or pay a cheap price of 10 Yuan to savor a couple of chicken wings. However, to be honest,
the taste of the main course items in the restaurant is of average quality only. Most of them are microwave re-heated then served, instead being made on-the-spot, hence jeopardizing the freshness of the food. In the past, I liked to go to IKEA on weekdays to get free coffee. But now, I do not think having coffee in the evening is such a good idea anymore. The caffeine will make me so alert that I cannot sleep at night. IKEA must be using high quality coffee beans to be able to produce such strong coffee.

soso绝对不能用！！！！！是非常informal的词！！
还有to后面要用present tense。
其他还有很多错我都改了，有问题可以问我。

Answer 2

IKEA is a furniture mall which I offen visited. Though decorating home is
a long future plan for me, I also could feel excited when I saw the
model houses in IKEA and make a design in my heart. I have bought a lot
of IKEA small things like storage things or kitchen things which is cheap
with high quality. Those things is much safer than the same things
belong to Taobao. In another hand, IKEA restaurantis another good place
for eating or resting. You can got nice dessert (but alittle expensive)
or pay 10 yuan get a couple of wings (that's cheap). However,to be honest,
the meal in the restaurant is just soso, most of them are
second-handed.In the past time, I like to went to IKEA to get free
coffee on workday,but now. I just think dinner coffee in the evening will make me feel exciting that I will be hard to get sleep. The coffee beans in IKEA is so good it's more easily to feel exciting and hard to sleeping in the evening.