some people think tomorrow is so important,others focus on the present. how important is it for individuals and countries to think of futiure rather than focus on the present?
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we often puzzle about the importance of the future and present as they are so conglicting that it semms impossible to find a balance between them.I believe both the countries and individuals should have a clear awareness of what is vital to nowadays and the prosperity in the future days.
As for countries,it depends on the develpment of it.Thait means developed and developing countries should focus on different topics.In terms of the developed ones,i believe it is of greater significance to pay more attention on the environment protection .Regarding to the pullutants they have had,giving more financial support to the decrometci organizers is rally effective way to reduce pollution and develop in a sustainable way for the governmengts.On contrast,when it comes to the developing coulittlentries ,it can be an another story.Developing ones have a low degree of modernlization ralatively,hence it is of little inportance for them to protect environment rather than developing more on the ecolomy.Therefor,present is much more crucial for the developing countries.
Turning to the anther point that which is more worth concerntrating on,i still believe it depengs.For the individual who is under 25,education is the initial task for them to compelte.Only through education can they have a better future,therefore their main duty is to study hard and improve the academic knowledge as much as possible.Nonetheless,when for the young studengts who is over 25,accumulating work skills is the forst tough work in the near far,as they are responsible to themselves and aslo should care more about the present than the future .In fact,their future is based on the present situations and hardworking.Anything they really want has to be worth fighting for.
In conculsion, I really believe that developed countries should focus on the environment as they need to prosper in the long run while developing countries should take more enphasis on their their economy.On the other hand,it is essential for individuals who are independent to think about their present work while to the young students who depend on their parents economically ,education is the best way for them to contruct thire future.