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1...Just before 9o'clock on Sunday evening 28 May ,1967, he arrived back in England,where a quarter of a million people were waiting to welcome him.Queen Elizabeth II knighted him with the very sword that Queen Elizabeth I had usde almost 400 years earlier to knight Sir Francis Drake after th had sailed round the world for the first time .The whole voyage from England and back had covered 28,500 miles.It had taken him nine months ,of which the sailing time was 226 days .He had done what he wanted to accomplish.

2...Many people in the Unitde States spend most of their free time watching television .Certainly,there are many worthwhile programs on television, including news,educational programs for dhildren ,programs on current social prlblems ,plays ,movies,concerts,and so on .Nevertheless,perhaps people should not be spending so much of their time in front of the TV.Mr Mayer imagines what we might do if we were forced to find other activities.

3...After I made observations for a week ,Mr Hobbs asked me for an oral report of my findings.I covered my major points by telling him the following :
"If you have a quality control inspection,you will greatly improve your finished prlduct ."
"If the assembly line is redesigned,a smooth work flow can be achieved and time and energy can be saved ."
"If you decrease the height of the worktables,the machine operators will work more comfortably."
"If the management provides pleasant background music and beautifies the dull setting ,the factory will be much more productive ."
"If the workers have a fifteen-minute coffee break in the morning and afternon ,they will be more efficient."
"If excellent work results in frequent pay increases or prmotions,the workers will have freater incentive to produce"

4...In a certain store where they sell puddings,a number of these delicious things are laid out in a row duing the Christmas season .Here you may select the one which is most to your taste ,and you are even allowed to sample them before coming to a decision
I have often wondered whether some people ,who had no intention of making a purchase ,would take advantage of this privilege .One day I asked this question of the shop firl ,and Ilearned it was indeed the case.

5...Earlier scientists thought that during a man's lifetime the power of his brain decreased .But it is now thought that thisis not so .As long as the brain is given plenty of esercise it kees its power.It has been found that an old person who has always been mentally active has a quicker mind than a young person who has done only physical work .It is now thought that the more work we five our brains ,the more work they are able to do .
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太谢谢两位大侠了```

可是关于这一句`两位译得不一样噢``Queen Elizabeth II knighted him with the very sword that Queen Elizabeth I had usde almost 400 years earlier to knight Sir Francis Drake after th had sailed round the world for the first time ???

Answer 1

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1...Just before 9o'clock on Sunday evening 28 May ,1967, he arrived back in England,where a quarter of a million people were waiting to welcome him.Queen Elizabeth II knighted him with the very sword that Queen Elizabeth I had usde almost 400 years earlier to knight Sir Francis Drake after th had sailed round the world for the first time .The whole voyage from England and back had covered 28,500 miles.It had taken him nine months ,of which the sailing time was 226 days .He had done what he wanted to accomplish.
。。。他于1967年5月28日周日晚将近9点钟返回了英格兰,二十五万人等着欢迎他的归来。伊丽莎白女王二世用宝剑封他爵士，这把宝剑正是近四百年以前伊丽莎白女王一世为弗朗西斯*德雷克封爵时所用的那把剑，以褒奖他首次完成了环球航行。从英格兰出发的来回航程有28,500英里。此次环球航行耗时九个月，其中航行时间为226天。他已经完成了自己的夙愿。

2...Many people in the Unitde States spend most of their free time watching television .Certainly,there are many worthwhile programs on television, including news,educational programs for dhildren ,programs on current social prlblems ,plays ,movies,concerts,and so on .Nevertheless,perhaps people should not be spending so much of their time in front of the TV.Mr Mayer imagines what we might do if we were forced to find other activities.
。。。很多美国人在空闲时间看电视。当然了，电视节目中有很多值得一看的节目，包括新闻、儿童教育节目、反应当今社会种种问题的节目、戏剧、电影、音乐会等等。尽管如此，人们也不应该花费这么长时间来看电视。 如果我们被迫作出其他的选择，迈尔先生设想了我们能做什么。

3...After I made observations for a week ,Mr Hobbs asked me for an oral report of my findings.I covered my major points by telling him the following :
"If you have a quality control inspection,you will greatly improve your finished prlduct ."
"If the assembly line is redesigned,a smooth work flow can be achieved and time and energy can be saved ."
"If you decrease the height of the worktables,the machine operators will work more comfortably."
"If the management provides pleasant background music and beautifies the dull setting ,the factory will be much more productive ."
"If the workers have a fifteen-minute coffee break in the morning and afternon ,they will be more efficient."
"If excellent work results in frequent pay increases or prmotions,the workers will have freater incentive to produce"
。。。在我观察了一个星期之后，霍布斯先生要求我将所发现的情况给他口头汇报一下。我将主要要点向他通告如下：
“如果你有质量控制检验，你的制成品质量会大幅提高。”
“如果重新设计组装线，可以使工作流畅，还节省时间和能源。”
“如果你降低工作台的高度，机器操作人员工作起来会更加舒适。”
“如果管理层能够提供悦耳的背景音乐并且美化枯燥无味的背景，工厂会提高生产效率。”
“如果工人在上午和下午各有十五分钟的喝咖啡空闲时间，他们的工作效率会更高。”
“如果对工作优秀者经常涨薪或者提升，那么工人的生产积极性会更高”

4...In a certain store where they sell puddings,a number of these delicious things are laid out in a row duing the Christmas season .Here you may select the one which is most to your taste ,and you are even allowed to sample them before coming to a decision
I have often wondered whether some people ,who had no intention of making a purchase ,would take advantage of this privilege .One day I asked this question of the shop firl ,and Ilearned it was indeed the case.
。。。在圣诞节期间，有一家销售布丁的商店将一些美食摆放在一排架子上。您在这里可以选择最合您口味的，您甚至可以在决定购买之前免费尝试。我常常捉摸着是否有一些不想买而贪便宜的人。一天，我对女售货员提出了这个问题，结果发现事实还真是如此。

5...Earlier scientists thought that during a man's lifetime the power of his brain decreased .But it is now thought that thisis not so .As long as the brain is given plenty of esercise it kees its power.It has been found that an old person who has always been mentally active has a quicker mind than a young person who has done only physical work .It is now thought that the more work we five our brains ,the more work they are able to do .
。。。早期的科学家认为，大脑能力在人的一生中呈下降的趋势。而现在则认为，这种说法并非真实。只要大脑得到充分锻炼，其能力是不会衰弱的。 现在已经发现，大脑始终活跃的老人大脑要比只从事体力工作的年轻人大脑还要敏捷。目前的看法是，我们用脑越多，大脑就越能干更多的工作。

注解：Queen Elizabeth II knighted him with the very sword that 伊丽莎白女王二世正是用这把剑为他封爵。

to knight somebody with something 是指“用某物为某人封爵”，某物只是封爵仪式所需要的，而未必将某物送给被封爵的人。

供参考。

Answer 2

1 ...在67年5月28日星期天的晚上九点前，他回到英格兰，在那里有25万人正在等待欢迎他.女王伊丽莎白二世正式的封他为爵士，距上次女王伊丽莎白一世的封爵是在400年前以弗朗西斯德雷克爵士后首次绕世界航行一周。整个航程自英格兰来回涉及28,500 英里.用时9个月，其中航行时间为226天。他做到了他希望完成的任务。
2 ...许多人在美国耗费了他们大量的自由来看电视。当然，仍然许多有价值的电视节目，包括新闻，幼儿教育节目，关于目前的社会问题 ，戏剧，电影，音乐会，等等。然而，人们也许不应该花太多的时间在电视的前面，梅耶先生猜测如果我们被迫寻找其他的活动还可以做什么。
3 ...距我提交意见一个星期后，霍布斯让我做一个关于我的调查研究结果的口头报告.涵盖我告诉他的主要点如下：
“如果你有一个质量控制检查，您将极大地改善您的成品”
“如果重新设计的装配生产线，可以使工作流程平稳流畅，节省时间和精力 ”
“如果你降低工作台的高度，机床工人将更加舒适。 ”
“如果管理阶层能够提供舒适的背景音乐和美化那些沉闷的设置，该工厂将更加富有成效。 ”
“如果工人在上午和下午能有15分钟的休息时间 ，他们将更有效率。 ”
“如果出色的工作成果能够多次加薪，工人将更加有生产地动力”

4 ...在一些出售糕点的商店，圣诞节期间一些好吃的东西会被成排的摆开。在这里，您可以选择其中最合您口味的，你甚至可以在作出决定前品尝样品，我常常想知道，是否会有不打算进行购买的一些人利用这一特权。一天，我问女店员这个问题并了解到的确如此。

5 ...早些时候科学家认为在一个人的一生中他的脑子里的能量会有所下降。但现在认为并非如此，只要大脑有足够的运动它会保持它的能量.人们发现，一个一向思维活跃的老年人比一个年轻的只有体力劳动的人更敏捷。现在认为，对于我们的大脑，做越多的工作，越有能力做到。