第1个回答 2015-09-20
行3 and=>by the way
行5 before 2 months=>in the last 2 months
行6 两句合并 ... I always went running for 1 hour every morning.
行8 i never gave up
行12 so...that表达有点奇怪。her legs are long so she has advantages in winning the game.
行14 no matter 内容和though 重复。no matter what happens, as i believe, success will be achieved if you don't give up.
行16 troubles。此处trouble并不特指某个trouble
行5 before 2 months=>in the last 2 months
行6 两句合并 ... I always went running for 1 hour every morning.
行8 i never gave up
行12 so...that表达有点奇怪。her legs are long so she has advantages in winning the game.
行14 no matter 内容和though 重复。no matter what happens, as i believe, success will be achieved if you don't give up.
行16 troubles。此处trouble并不特指某个trouble
第2个回答 2015-09-20
谢谢
本回答被提问者采纳第3个回答 2015-09-20
我仿佛又在做短文改错。。追答
应该是how be like
doing sports
追问还有呢
追答relax ourselves.
relax后面宾语全部不要
meeting
就帮你把第一段改完把
顺便说一句，你的英语作文的单词不要写的太多了，不然老师会看起来很烦。。最好保持在80字左右
剩下的你自己改把。。你写的太多了。。
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