求英语作文，急。谢谢

Question

内容要点：1科学博物馆离家五公里，2乘公交车早上八点出发，十点半离开博物馆，3看到很多照片，实物，模型等，4遇见很多父母带着孩子，教师带着学生也在参观，还有一些外国人。
要求：包括所有内容要点，可适当增加观后感

Answer 1

This weekend ，24 January,I went to visit the Science Museum with my parents。
The Science Museum is 5 kilometers away from my home，so we need to
take the bus . We went there at 8 o’clock in the morning ,I saw many pictures and modles in the Science Museum , they are very nice！and I saw some parents took their children and teachers took parents to visit it . There were also lots of foreigners , it's very interesting ！We went home at half past ten.
What a wonderful day ！
绝对是咱自己写的，不是拿去翻译网糊弄来的！

Answer 2

we visited the Science Museum today,the museum is about 5 kilometers from my home, this morning , I got up very early, I took a bus to the muesum at half past eight, there were many things in the museum, first , the guide showed us around the room where many pictures and models were on show, then I visited the real objects room, there were many old things, I learned about ancient Chinese people, there were a lot of people in the museum because it was Sunday, some children came with their parents, several teachers showed their students around the museum, there were also some foreigners, they were all very interested in the objects on show, I left the museum at half past ten, what a happy day!