英语短文改错

Question

One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend,a truck came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn't believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted,so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return.
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Answer 1

刚好十处错误！
二楼第一处错误改错，后面有一题需要把everyone改错someone!

One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my (friends), a truck came to a stop (beside) us. The driver put the window down and offered us (an) umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn't believe (去掉in） that a complete stranger (was) so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I (gratefully) accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, (but) he preferred to give it to (someone) else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible (to) give without (expecting) anything in return.

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Answer 2

One rainy day while(when) I was walking home with one of my friend（friends),a truck came to a stop besides(beside) us. The driver put the window down and offered us a(an) umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn't believe in(去掉in) that a complete stranger is(was) so thoughtful. The man insisted,so I grateful (gratefully )accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and（but) he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible (加to)give without expect （expecting ）anything in return.
说明：括号里面改的是前一个词。

Answer 3

1 One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend 不是friend 应该是friends
2 The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella 应该是 an umbrella
3 I stood there and couldn't believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful 不是believe in 而是believe
4 and he preferred to give it to everyone else and改成but,不是everyone else 而是anyone else
5 It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return. possible 和give 之间加一个to

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Answer 4

1 one of my friend 改为 one of my friends
2 besides 改为 beside
3 a umbrella 改为 an umbrella
4 so I grateful accepted the offer 改为 so I was grateful to accipt the offer
5 and he preferred to give it to everyone else 改为 but he preferred to give it to ereryone else who need
6 It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in retrun 改为 It was a lesson for us that it was possible given without expecting anything in return
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