最右边这幅有三处需要改动:
1)Because of the above resons,建议改成: Due to the above reasons;
2)difficultly要改成形容词:difficult
3)conclude that,有了that,后面应该接从句,建议改成:it is not difficult to conclude that tobaco prodution tends to decrease in the future.
追问好的,谢谢你,按照你说的改,我感觉我的作文瞬间得到升华🤗
您方便帮我再看看第二页的吗?我之前上传的图片好像不是很清楚
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拜托啦🙏