英语求助,寻求高手,不要用翻译软件

我们英语考试,老师给我们出了三个话题让我们准备。每一个准备最少一分钟,所以希望英语高手能帮助下。
一、Will you buy a house or rent an apartment after your graduation
(这问题我想围着买房来说以下这是我写的最好翻译正确,不要用翻译软件)当我毕业时会选择买房,有套属于自己的房子,让我很有归属感,虽然要当房奴,但最终房子归我所有。随着经济的发展,房子会有的升值。同时,它也是现在人们结婚必备的条件之一。而租房会让我没有归属感,我认为长期租房的资金足够我们去买一套属于我自己的房子,所以毕业后我会坚持买房。(如果各位网友有补充请说,我会借鉴一下)
二、Do you have any suggestions about how to keep good healthy?

三、What do you value most in your future career?(这个围绕“经验”是最重要的来说)

请各位网友看好每个要求最少一分钟,我次我会下重分来奖励帮助我的英语高手们。
上面打错个字,“房子会有的升值”应该是“房子会有所升值”

1.All the people will face the question:will you purchase or rent a department, when you graduate? For me, the answer is former. Although I would be a mortagage salve, the sense of belonging will let me feel well. With the growth ecomonic, the value of department will be growth too. Meanwhile, it is one of the essential conditions for marriage to own a house. In my view, the long-term rental is enough to purchase one department. So why not I won't purchase a department. I will insist to buy a department after my graduation.

2.二楼回答的挺好。我就不做了~

3.(你够幸运的,我刚好做HR。) In my furture career, I focus on my working experience. Why I said like this, there're some reasons as follow:-Firstly,there'is a greatest number of grads from univeristy everyyear, with the annual great university enrollment. That means that we won't have any educational competition, except the university brand. Second, when HR managers select the candidates for the postions, they will pay attention at the working experience and the working period. Last, your salary level also will be determined by the working experience. Therefore, I think all the students often join in the part-time jobs during the leisure time, in order to prepare well. It is too important to focus on the working experience.
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第1个回答  2010-06-22
1,When I graduate,I hope I can choose purchases homes,that has the wrap to belong to own house.Of course,it will let me have the sense of belonging very much, although I must mortgage a house the slave, but the final house belongs to me to possess.Along with the economical development, the revaluation which the house I can have.At the same time, it also is the present people marries one of necessary conditions.But rents a room can let me not have the sense of belonging as well.So I thought renting a room for a long time fund enough we buy a set to belong to my house, after therefore the graduation I can persist purchases homes.
虽然你那么说,但还是忍不住,此篇部分用用翻译软件,加我部分修改
2,As a saying goes,"Health is bettern than wealth."This is mean that good health is the most important in our life .So,how to keep good healthy.In my opinion,if you want to keep you healthy,you should do well in at least three ways as follows. first and foremost,participate in regular physical activities,for example,walking,running,playing badminton and so on.This will improve your bood circulation around body and promote your ability to against diseases.Besides,eat sanitery food which have no poluted vegetables and lower in fat or cholesterol meat.Eatting natural food as possible as you could and far away from food with hormons,color materials and additives.last but not least,giving up bad habid,such as smoking,gambling,dirting and so on.In addition,we should keep a good mood all the time.At the same time,Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.However, if we can't do it best ,it may give rise to a host of problems. Every coin has to sides,where there is a way ,there is a way.
All in all,only we pay close attention to the aspects above,we could keep our body in good condition.

3,不好意思,这个太难了
第2个回答  2010-06-22
一.请问你买一所房子或租公寓后,您毕业
二.你有任何关于如何保持健康的好建议?
三.你有什么价值,你未来的职业是什么?
第3个回答  2010-06-22
first of all,this is a very controversial question. people hold different attitudes to buy a house or rent a house. since the price of house is inflating constantly, many young couples choose to rent a house.it is a realistic choice. (这是我自己加的)however,in my case, i gonna buy my own house after graduation,for it gives me a sense of belonging. although i will become a slave of my house, the house will belong to me at last. with the economic development, house rate will inflate. meantime, a house is an indispensable condition of a marriage.on the contrary, if i gonna rent a house, i do not have the sense of belonging, what's more, the longtime rental is enough for us to buy a set of house belonging to ourselves. therefore, i insist on buying my own house after graduation.

2.keeping healthy is not only what the old man shoud take into account, but also everyone's lifetime career.health is the foundation of any other thing. so it is extremely important for every individual to keep a good health. in my opionion, first, doing exerise to build up our body and strengthen the immune system. people fall ill for weak ability to defeat invading germ or virus mostly,hence to strengthen you immune system is very a effictive way to keep healty. second, keep a good mood, is a very beneficial shortcut to keep a good health, for happy mood often make people relaxed ,thereby you every organ in your body can work more efficient; third, cultivate at least one hobby. people have his interest is more tolerable; and such a person has better temperament. furthermore, he will not in constant depression or disappointment. so he can keep good health.

至于第三个问题,楼上的理解好像是错的哦。问题是“在未来的职业生涯中,你最重视(珍惜)什么?”
here is my answer.
from my perspective, experience is the thing i value most in my future career. although knowledge plays the same important role in both work and daily life, experience is more appliable to practice. expericen teaches us specialized skill instead of pure theory. actually, it is a kind of treasure which became more and more valuable with time goes. experience lets me competitive in the intense social competition. and i believe people with social experience can adapt to different position faster, because he had been in a life or situation like the as.
本人英语专业的哦。。希望能帮到你哈。。哈哈
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