错误很多，在尽量保持你原有风格和表达方式的情况下，作如下改动：
My favorite thing is a photo. I took it when I made a trip to Sichuan Province. There is a rushing river and some mountains in it. It is so beautiful that the photo always makes me think back to the wonderful trip and It can get me to be in a good mood. In this photo, this sky is blue and a bird is flying. The flowers are colorful in the grassland.
Whenevere my stress increases, I have a look at the photo and it can always make me relaxed. The photo is my invaluable collection.
My favorite thing is a photo. I took it when I made a trip to Sichuan Province. There is a rushing river and some mountains in it. It is so beautiful that the photo always makes me think back to the wonderful trip and It can get me to be in a good mood. In this photo, this sky is blue and a bird is flying. The flowers are colorful in the grassland.
Whenevere my stress increases, I have a look at the photo and it can always make me relaxed. The photo is my invaluable collection.
温馨提示：答案为网友推荐，仅供参考
第1个回答 2017-10-07
arrived, it most likely meant someone h
相似回答
大家正在搜