第2个回答 2009-12-19
I don't know why I miss you at that time, but you will be the only forever. My lover, birthday is coming, are you happy?
有两处小错:
1. at that time 意思是“在那时”,如果你想说过去,那么第一句就得改为 I don't know why I missed you at that time (为何那时我曾思念过你);如果只想表示此时此刻,改用 I don't know why I am missing you right now (为何此时我思念起来你);.
2. birthday is coming 和 are you happy 分别是两个主谓结构,而两个句子需要考虑连接手段,要么并列,要么从属,改法如下:
Your birthday is coming, and are you happy?
Are you happy for your birthday is coming?
Since your birthday is coming, are you happy?
第3个回答 2009-12-19
如果是“我不知道我为什么现在那么想你,但你永远是我的唯一。我的爱人,你的生日就要到了,你开心吗?”
应是“I don't know why i miss you at the moment,but you will be the only one foever/my only one foever.my dear/my baby/my honey/my brid...,your birthday is coming,are you happy?”