英语句子改错

Question

the flag raised slowly as people sang the national anthem
the first word of a sentence should start in capital letter
not speaking french in paris is real disability
l want to give you some advices on this work
l meant writing to you . but l was too busy
l hope you a happy new year
when l read the article,l was in bad spirit
he faild in the exam,that was natural

Answer 1

1. raised 改成 rose
析：raise是及物动词，后面要跟宾语，这里没有宾语，因此应该用不及物动词，上升即rise的过去式rose

2. in 改成 with
析：以...开始，用介词with

3. real disability 改成 a real disability
析：disability-障碍、残疾是可数名词，前面要用不定冠词a

4. advices 改成 advice
析：advice在表示“忠告”、“建议”时作不可数名词，没有复数形式

5. writing to you 改成 to write to you
析：mean to do.. 打算做某事，不是mean doing

6. you a happy new year 改成 you have a happy new year
析：hope后面跟从句，要么跟to do，但不能hope sb. to do，所以这句应该改为从句

7. I read 改成 I was reading
析：应用过去进行时表示看书这个动作的延续

8. that 改成 which
析：一个句子只能有一个主语和谓语，前面he failed已经是一个主谓结构，后面that was的主谓结构必须以从句形式体现，把that改为which变成一个同位语从句，表示这个事实（他没通过考试）很正常

Answer 2

raised改成rose
start with
disability改成disadvantage （不利条件，劣势）
advice (不可数）
mean to write
I wish you...
in low spirit
that改成which

Answer 3

the flag rised slowly as people sang the national anthem
the first word of a sentence should start with a capital letter
not being able to speak french in paris is real disability
l want to give you some advice on this work
l meant to write to you . but l was too busy
l wish you a happy new year
when l read the article,l was in bad state
he faild in the exam,which was natural

Answer 4

国旗在众人的国歌声中冉冉升起
一个句子应该由一个大写的字母开始
在巴黎不会说法语是一种现实的残疾
我想在这个工作上给你一些建议
我本想写信给你，但是我太忙了
祝你新年快乐
当我读到这篇文章的时候，我的心情很糟糕
他考试没有及格，那是自然（当然）的事