根据下面表格所提供的信息，写一篇70词的短文，介绍你的笔友Jane的家庭及她的活动, 可适当发挥。 Name Jane 家庭成员 父亲、母亲、妹妹（5岁） 职 业 父亲：办公室职员 母亲：教师Jane：学生 Jane的活动时间表 6:10 起床 6:30 吃早餐 7:20 去上学 12:15 吃午餐 17:00 回家 17:40 帮妈妈做饭 18:25 吃晚餐
| I have a pen pal. Her name is Jane. Her father is an office worker. He works in an office. Her mother is a teacher. She teaches English in a high school. Jane is a student. She has a sister. Her sister is only five years old. Jane usually gets up at 6:10. She has breakfast at 6:30 and goes to school at 7:20. Jane has lunch at a quarter past twelve. In the afternoon, she goes home at five o’clock. Then she helps her mother cook supper. They have dinner at six twenty –five. |
| 试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍一个新笔友。本文做给材料比较详细，动笔前先根据材料确定时态，句式，词汇等主要内容。根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称应该是第三人称。写作中注意使用连接词，注意表达的多样化，做到语意连贯符合逻辑。 点评：在写书面表达是首先要注意的问题就是人称，不能混淆人称；其次，应注意动词的英语，根据不同的人称确定动词的形式；再次，句型应该符合英语的表达习惯；最后，用自己熟练掌握的句型造句。 |