(悬赏!)跪求英语翻译帝帮翻译一篇复试的自我介绍

南大地质系复试英语自我介绍,事关前途,请您帮我斟酌一下,力求像英语,用词简练合理,尽量符合面试口语规范。谢绝金山,在线翻译!!!!!
下面我给出英语,一些专业词汇您可以不翻译,不合英语规范和不合复试要求的汉语您可以帮我指出、删减。救人一命,您是好人!!
各位老师早上好!我叫XX,今年22岁,即将毕业于吉林大学地球科学学院、资源勘查工程专业。我的家乡是漯河,漯河是河南省中部的一个漂亮的小城市。我来自于一个教室之家,我的父母都是中学教师。我的姥爷也是教师,我的名字也是他为我取的,意思是希望我能成为一个博学者和绅士。他上个月刚刚去世,很遗憾未能让他看到我的录取通知书。
我非常喜欢(do really love?)地质专业,特别是经过近三年的专业知识学习,以及跟随老师进行一些野外工作以后。我尤其欣赏矿床学的研究方式,这种理论与实际、整体与局部。数据与实物相结合的研究方式让我充满兴趣。因此,我特别希望通过研究生阶段的深入学习,掌握更多的理论和实践知识。只有这样,我才能更深入的了解这门自然科学,并为自己的未来打好基础。
英语可能是我的障碍。我认为英语是研究生的重要技能之一,因此在研究生阶段我会更加努力的学习英语,提高自己的英语水平。我认为我的优势是宽广的知识面,逻辑思维和文字组织能力(写作?文学?这个该怎么表达~)
俗话(谚语)说,“天道酬勤”(自助者,天助之?),我希望用努力我的成功。
That is all for my self-introdution。Thank you!
废话太多的话您给捡不废话的翻译下

Good morning my honorable professors,

it's my great pleasure to have this interview opportunity .

My name is ** ,I am 22 years old , i will soon graduate from the College of Earth Sciences of Jilin University, and i am major in Natural Resources Prospecting Engineering.

I'm from Henan Province, and Luohe is my hometown .I was born in a scholarly family ,both of my parents are teachers, so was my grandfather who passed away last month. He picked my name as ** in the hope that i could become a gentleman with profound knowledge one day.It'a great pity that he didn't have the chance to share my joy of receiving the offer from nanjing university.

I do love the major of Geological Engineering ,especially after three years of professional knowledge learning and working outside with my directors,i 'm becoming more and more interested in doing researches on Mineral Deposit Geology . The research method of intergrading theory and practice, local and systemic ,data and matter really aroused my interest.

Therefore, I'm looking forward to be a postgraduate so that i can improve myself. I hope you can offer me such a chance to lay firm foundation for my future development.

Where there is a will, there is a way.
Thanks so much for your time.

呵呵,年轻人,祝你成功!
最后一段关于学习英语的,我个人认为纯属多余,水平是靠实力展示出来的,能力的认可不是靠谦虚和承诺赢得的。但若你强烈要求加译,我可以效劳,所谓帮人帮到底。祝你好运!记得录取了发个庆祝贴哦呵呵。
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第1个回答  2010-03-21
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第2个回答  2010-03-21
Nanda Department of Geology, re-examination self-introduction in English is vital to the future, please help me carefully to see, and strive, as in English, concise and reasonable terms, as far as possible in line with standard oral interview. Declined Jinshan, an online translator! ! ! ! !
Now I give in English, some of the professional vocabulary that you can not translate, sub-standard and substandard English, Chinese re-testing requirements that you can help me point out that deletion. Save a life, you are good! !
You are all Good morning! My name is XX, this 22-year-old will soon be graduated from the School of Earth Sciences, Jilin University, resource exploration engineering. My home is a Luohe, Luohe is in central Henan Province, a beautiful small city. I come from a classroom at home, my parents are secondary school teachers. My grandfather is also a teacher, my name is his for me to take, meaning that Bo wanted me to become a scholar and a gentleman. He had just passed away last month, I am sorry I could not let him see the admission notice.
I really like (do really love?) Geological profession, especially after nearly three years of professional knowledge and learning and teachers to conduct some field work to follow later. I particularly appreciate the deposit of research in science, this theory and practice, whole and partial. Data and in-kind combination of research methods great interest in me. Therefore, I particularly hope that through post-graduate stage of the in-depth study, to have more theoretical and practical knowledge. Only in this way, I can only more in-depth understanding of the natural science, and to lay the foundation for their future.
English may be my obstacle. I think that English is one of the skills important to graduate students, so at the graduate level, I will be more effort to learn English, improve their standard of English. I think I have the advantage of a broad range of knowledge, logical thinking and writing organizational skills (writing? Literature? How to express this in the ~)
Saying goes (proverb) says, "Inf" (those who help themselves, who helped them days?), I want to my success.
That is all for my self-introdution. Thank you!
第3个回答  2010-03-22
你的自我介绍太冗长了。复试时根本不会给你那么长的时间让你将等长的英文背完。建议只介绍一下你的个人基本情况和学术兴趣与专长,至于家庭还有姥爷什么的就别说了。准备三分钟的英文介绍即可,最多不超过五分钟,说多了,又不流利,让老师反感。
第4个回答  2010-03-23
Good morning every teacher! My name is xx, I am 22 years old, I am going to graduate from Resource Explore Course in Earth Science College at Jiling University soon.My hometown is Luohe, it is one of the beautiful towns in the centre of Henan province. I am from a teaching family which my parents are teacher. My grandfather is teacher too. He is the person who gave me my name, the meaning is wishing me become a erudite person and a gentleman. He died last month , so pity that he didn't see my admission notice.
I really love Geology, especially after 3 years of studying and excursions with teachers. I like the way we do the research of mineral deposit, this combination of theory and reality , entirety and part study way makes me feel interested. So I really hope that I can learn more on this course from postgraduate study time. Only this way ,I can study deeply on this course and make a good base for my future.
English skill can be my barrier. I know English skill is one of the most important skills for postgraduate, so I will study English more hard during my postgraduating time to improve my English. I think my preponderance is my extensive knowledge, logic thinking and good writting skill.
There is a proverb says ," Hard work will get good rewarding". I hope that my hard work will bring me success.

That is all for my self-introdution.Thank you!
第5个回答  2010-03-24
Good morning teachers! My name is XX, 22, from jilin university graduate institute of earth science, resource exploration engineering. My hometown is luo river in central henan province, luohe is a beautiful city. I come from a classroom, my parents are middle school teachers. My father is a teacher, my name is he for me, it is hoped I can become a bo scholars and the gentleman. Last month he has just died, unfortunately failed to let him see my admission.
I very like (love) you save? Geology, especially after nearly three years of professional knowledge, and follow the teacher some wild after work. I especially enjoy the research methods, this kind of theory and practice, the whole and the parts. Combined with the real data of study way, let me full of interest. Therefore, I really hope that through in-depth study of the postgraduate stage, learn more knowledge of theory and practice. Only in this way, I can more in-depth understanding of the natural science, and the door for his future.
English is probably my obstacles. I think that English is one of the most important skills for graduate students in graduate school, so I study English harder, to improve their English level. I think my advantage is broad knowledge, logical thinking ability and text organization (writing? How to express this literature?)
They (the proverb, "said)" (self-help plat-making, divine-help)? I want to use my success。