我写的英文的自我介绍，请高手帮忙看看有没有错误的地方，急！！！！

Question

Hello,good morning.My name is Gao Yu,I'm thirteen years old.I study in Dong Guan Primary School.I'm in Grade six Class one.
I like play computer and study English very much,and I often play computer games with my classmates.Noodles is my favourite food,I think it's delicious.I like the sea very much,so I like blue,too.Because the sea is blue.My English teacher is Duan Xiaoqin,she is very friendly to us,I like her very much.
This is me,thank you!

我写的，看看有没有错误的地方，另发出来一份中文翻译，谢谢，好的话加分！

Answer 1

good morning everyone
I like playing computer and learning/studying English very much
I like the blue sea very much and I like blue,too.
首先想说你写的已经很好了，基本上没有什么语法错误，继续加油~

大家早上好。我叫Gao Yu，今年13岁，就读于Dong Guan小学六年级一班。
我非常喜欢玩电脑和学英语。我还经常和同学们一起玩电脑游戏。面条是我的最爱，我觉得它很好吃。我很喜欢大海，也喜欢蓝色，因为海就是蓝色的。我的英语老师叫Duan Xiaoqin，她对我们亲切和蔼，我很喜欢她。
这就是我，谢谢大家。

Answer 2

I like play...study改为I like playing...studying;
Noodles改为Noodle；

早上好！我叫高群，今年13岁。我就读于东莞小学六年级一班。
我非常喜欢玩电脑和学英语。我经常和同学一起玩电脑游戏。我喜欢吃面条，我觉得面条很可口。我十分喜欢大海，因此喜欢蓝色。因为大海就是蓝色的。我的英语老师叫段小琴。她对我们非常友好，我非常喜欢她。
这就是我，谢谢！