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正文:
Yuan Longping was born in 1930. Since he graduated from Southwest Agricultural College in 1953, he has devoted his life to finding ways to grow more and more rice. As a young man, he sawthe great need for increasing the rice output.
At that time, hunger was a serious problem in many parts of the countryside. He searched for a way to increase rice harvests without expanding the area of the fields.
翻译:袁隆平出生于1930年。自1953年从西南农业学院毕业以来,他一直致力于寻找种植更多水稻的方法。作为一个年轻人,他看到了增加稻米产量的巨大需要。
那时,饥饿是农村许多地区的一个严重问题。他想办法在不扩大田地面积的情况下增加水稻收成。