英语作文高手进来(高分)
题目如下:
The photo and the flow chart show how important fashion and a person's appearance have become in modern society.Use the information to present and discuss with the examiner the following points:
第一段写:positive and negative aspects of following fashion.
第二段写:Ways in which people in the contemporary world are trying to emphasise their individuality.
第三段写:Symptoms of the growing importance of people's appearance in contemporary in contemporary culture.
图表如下:
请大哥大姐帮我写写,我下周要演讲这个作文.
每段写个七八十个单词吧.
谢谢了. 不要copy的. 写的好 我再追加100分!
这个图片就是图表.
大家点进去看, 这样看太小了
1楼的太扯淡了,我叫写什么, 他写了什么..
还顶, 顶什么嘛.
我在南非念高中,I couldnt see the words underneath the horizontal axis.
In the modern day, to dress in fashion is a way that most people follow. But everything got a negative aspect and a positive aspect, so did fashion.
Apparently, nice and fashionable getup can make you look nicer and attractive, then you will be able to grab more attention from others, for instance, when you are busy having an interview with your boss, the nice getup or figure will be impressed into his mind, then he will consider about you more than when you dress in an ordinary getup, but you know, it also got a bad aspect, people now so concern about their looks, therefore, they don't hard work, instead of it, people just spend a huge amount of money and time on clothes, decorations and etc.
Now, people show their ideas of fashion in so many ways, like walking on the street with a new-fashion clothes, like doing something special, but anyway, every person got their own idea of fashion to show how their personalities are, so we also can say that one's ideas of fashion is also who he is.
From above, you will get that you must repect one's fashion just like respecting his personalities.
最后一段，和我前面写的差不多呵呵
In the modern day, to dress in fashion is a way that most people follow. But everything got a negative aspect and a positive aspect, so did fashion.
Apparently, nice and fashionable getup can make you look nicer and attractive, then you will be able to grab more attention from others, for instance, when you are busy having an interview with your boss, the nice getup or figure will be impressed into his mind, then he will consider about you more than when you dress in an ordinary getup, but you know, it also got a bad aspect, people now so concern about their looks, therefore, they don't hard work, instead of it, people just spend a huge amount of money and time on clothes, decorations and etc.
Now, people show their ideas of fashion in so many ways, like walking on the street with a new-fashion clothes, like doing something special, but anyway, every person got their own idea of fashion to show how their personalities are, so we also can say that one's ideas of fashion is also who he is.
From above, you will get that you must repect one's fashion just like respecting his personalities.
最后一段，和我前面写的差不多呵呵
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第1个回答 2009-09-26
a research shows that the average expenditure on cloths has increased dramatically in past 40 years, which implies an increasing number of people tends to follow fashion. Advocates hold they can be found especially attractive by following fashion. Like a coin has two sides, others,especially economist, argue that to some extent fasion is a waste of money.
Actually, people who follow fasion trends are copying others' lifestyles, which,of couse, is not the way we should emphasize personalities. In the contemporary world, some people direct their attentions to those things which can express the different sides from others like cloths, behavious, bodylanguage. The persons who believe in “be myself' will not do something different intentionally but do what they like, which is also a way of emphasizing personalities.
As people take growing notice of appeareance, some symptoms are emerging.Those people who put excessive energy on improving appereance may spend money lavishly and ignore "inside" development.Futhermore,Taking medicine or controling food intake to lose weights are the most popular ways for some girls who prefers to keep slim and good-looking. However, they do not realize these solutions can result in serious health problems.
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Actually, people who follow fasion trends are copying others' lifestyles, which,of couse, is not the way we should emphasize personalities. In the contemporary world, some people direct their attentions to those things which can express the different sides from others like cloths, behavious, bodylanguage. The persons who believe in “be myself' will not do something different intentionally but do what they like, which is also a way of emphasizing personalities.
As people take growing notice of appeareance, some symptoms are emerging.Those people who put excessive energy on improving appereance may spend money lavishly and ignore "inside" development.Futhermore,Taking medicine or controling food intake to lose weights are the most popular ways for some girls who prefers to keep slim and good-looking. However, they do not realize these solutions can result in serious health problems.
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第2个回答 2009-09-27
不好意思，说昨天写没写。
现在写了
The positive effect of this phenomenon is quite obvious. Large expenditure on fashion and closing will indeed stimulate our economy. Also, it will also build the culture of one’s country. Like now, the England is famous for their retro and rebel fashion trend. But there can also be some drawback of this trend. If we look at the society as a whole, not everyone is rich enough to afford this huge amount of spending on cloth, there are still some people struggling for life. Kids might easily fall into this kind of competition, since they have less control over their mind.
The reason people want to emphasize their individuality is because of the gen. It is our instinct. No matter human or animal or plants,All of them are trying to rival with their same gender and the nature to pass their gen to the next generation. Living creatures will need to vary itself, to better adapt the nature, the society. And the gen that better suiting the environment will have a better chance to pass the bloodline to next generation.
The biggest symptoms of the growing importance of people’s appearance is that more and more brand of clothing, and more and more types of fashion are in front for us to chose. And also, to prove indirectly from another angle, it is also because the standard of our living is increase dramatically. People will always need to full fill their physical need first, then to the Spiritual pursuit. If one is starving, he or she will defiantly spend the money on food first.
现在写了
The positive effect of this phenomenon is quite obvious. Large expenditure on fashion and closing will indeed stimulate our economy. Also, it will also build the culture of one’s country. Like now, the England is famous for their retro and rebel fashion trend. But there can also be some drawback of this trend. If we look at the society as a whole, not everyone is rich enough to afford this huge amount of spending on cloth, there are still some people struggling for life. Kids might easily fall into this kind of competition, since they have less control over their mind.
The reason people want to emphasize their individuality is because of the gen. It is our instinct. No matter human or animal or plants,All of them are trying to rival with their same gender and the nature to pass their gen to the next generation. Living creatures will need to vary itself, to better adapt the nature, the society. And the gen that better suiting the environment will have a better chance to pass the bloodline to next generation.
The biggest symptoms of the growing importance of people’s appearance is that more and more brand of clothing, and more and more types of fashion are in front for us to chose. And also, to prove indirectly from another angle, it is also because the standard of our living is increase dramatically. People will always need to full fill their physical need first, then to the Spiritual pursuit. If one is starving, he or she will defiantly spend the money on food first.
第3个回答 2009-09-20
惊恐，乃多大啊，乃们作文要写酿多?
虽然这些都看的懂不过还是懒的写了..
建议你最后去找同类型的作文看看，现在网上直接翻译的比较多..
虽然这些都看的懂不过还是懒的写了..
建议你最后去找同类型的作文看看，现在网上直接翻译的比较多..
第4个回答 2009-09-20
Summer swimming safety can not be ignored(标题)
以下正文;
More hot days, the public swimming pool has become a favored place, leisure Xiaoshu, we can feel good fitness. A pool of blue water, has a lovely, but there is also potential danger. When launched, it is necessary to strengthen self-protection, can not be taken lightly.
Children can not be launched personal, leisure areas and should have his or her parents; swimming beginners should be 1.4 meters below the shallow waters, and not alone in the pool practicing "Bieqi" so as not to choke water accidents, not in shallow water , The water in the region, "Zha Mengzi" to prevent head impact the bottom or wall are dangerous.
Special needs to be emphasized is that alcoholics do not swim. Because people in the consumption of wine, after dinner, more blood will flow of movement of organs and skin, which will make brain blood supply shortage. And alcoholics in the water to breathe, his head constantly about swing and the head, bow, coupled with wave Dangyangguanru ears, the brain will be to stimulate the vestibular organ, causing dizziness and loss of balance, are dangerous.
以下正文;
More hot days, the public swimming pool has become a favored place, leisure Xiaoshu, we can feel good fitness. A pool of blue water, has a lovely, but there is also potential danger. When launched, it is necessary to strengthen self-protection, can not be taken lightly.
Children can not be launched personal, leisure areas and should have his or her parents; swimming beginners should be 1.4 meters below the shallow waters, and not alone in the pool practicing "Bieqi" so as not to choke water accidents, not in shallow water , The water in the region, "Zha Mengzi" to prevent head impact the bottom or wall are dangerous.
Special needs to be emphasized is that alcoholics do not swim. Because people in the consumption of wine, after dinner, more blood will flow of movement of organs and skin, which will make brain blood supply shortage. And alcoholics in the water to breathe, his head constantly about swing and the head, bow, coupled with wave Dangyangguanru ears, the brain will be to stimulate the vestibular organ, causing dizziness and loss of balance, are dangerous.
第5个回答 2009-09-20
The fashion advocates hold the view that fashions are a sort of social art, through which a society examines its notions of beauty and goodness. However, in the view of the critics, the term "fashion" should be taken in a negative sense, as a synonym for materialism, blindness and waste. They put forward that fashion is always led by the rich and it is the idea that the rich thrusts to the poor. Thus, fashion followers are regarded as being so vain that they are afraid of being despised or considered eccentric.
In current society, a large quantity of people well dress themselves in order to show their own personality. A minority of people wear worn trousers in public places so as to draw other’s attention.Many a people even wears a T-shirt in cold winter days and calls it a kind of "fashion"……
太晚了 真不好意思 我是高三生 我要睡觉了 所以给你点提示自己写吧 譬如面试 interview 老板挑员工看相貌 竞选学生会主席仪表要端庄 再有 人们对第一印象也是很在意的 希望能帮到你
In current society, a large quantity of people well dress themselves in order to show their own personality. A minority of people wear worn trousers in public places so as to draw other’s attention.Many a people even wears a T-shirt in cold winter days and calls it a kind of "fashion"……
太晚了 真不好意思 我是高三生 我要睡觉了 所以给你点提示自己写吧 譬如面试 interview 老板挑员工看相貌 竞选学生会主席仪表要端庄 再有 人们对第一印象也是很在意的 希望能帮到你
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