跪求 英语 文采好的仙后

Question

偶们英语课上有自由演讲 偶想要关于神起滴较抒情滴小文...中英文的~

Answer 1

In 12.26,2003 5 white angels came down from the heaven.They were Hero,Max, U-Know,Micky,Xiah"The god will appear from the east."is the meaning of TVXQ.They published their first song <Hug> in 1.14,2004.Soon,they had become famous all over the Asia. TVXQ had 800 thousand fans at least.
The fans call each other"Cassiopeia" the constellation of TVXQ's.Because the shape of Cassiopeia is like a "W".because of,"W" means 5 boys stay together forever~TVXQ forever~
I am not loving them for nothing,they give me power to live.They shining their hard working on the stage, show us the strength of the red lights, shines on the cassiopeia.
They are my power.They are the top star in my life.

我有一次英语演讲就用的这个 效果不错

Answer 2

1楼的不错，就是有一点小小的语病，稍微改改完全可以
而且用的都是简单的单词，LZ自己就能翻译成中文了

Answer 3

亲 加油~！