英语句子改错

Question

你太忙,没有时间打扫房间。让我来吧。
You are too busy,have't time to clean the room,let me do it.

A.你对他的看法怎样?
B. 他聪明,勤奋,就是有点自私。
A. 我也这样看。
A:What about do you think him?
B:He is diligent,But a bit selfish.
A:Me too

咱们去吃饭吧
Let's have a lunch.

他们在读书。
They reading book.

我们要在音乐会上唱歌。
We will singing in the concert

你付钱了吗？
Do you pay the bill?

我妹妹今天没去上学。她感冒了.
My sister did not go to school today.She have a cold.

你没有迟到
You are not be last.

你今天下午有空吗？
我四点以后才有空.
Are you have a time this afternoon?
well,It is after 4:00

We are leaveing,it is raining.
我们一出发，天就下起雨来了。

如果她更用功些，她就会学得更好。
If she has a hard work,she will studying more.

电影已经开始十分钟了
The film had been begining 10 minute

请判断上面句子的正误。若错误，请改正

Answer 1

基本上全错了，吃饭那句可以，不过特指午饭。太多了……
注意一下时态吧，动词啊~~

You are too busy to clean the room. Let me do it.
How do you like him?
He's diligent, but a little selfish.
I think so.
Let's go for lunch/dinner/...
They are reading (books).
We will sing (a song) on the concert.
Did you pay the bill?
My sister... She had a cold.
You are not late.
Are you free this afternoon?
After 4.
It rains as soon as we set off.
It'll be better if she works harder.
It has been 10 minutes since the movie began.

Answer 2

1不对。you are too busy to clean the room.
2.不对.what's your opinion towards him?
he is a little selfish
i agree with you
3.have lunch.中间没冠词
4.不对。they are reading books
5.不对。they will sing at the concert
6.把do 改成did
7.she had a cold.
8.you are not late.
9.are you free this afternoon?
i don't have time until 4:00
10. on our leaving, it started to rain
11.if she works harder, she will study better.
12.the film has been on for ten minutes

Answer 3

1.you are too busy to clean the room
2.what do you think of him?或how do you like him?
He is diligent,But a bit selfish.
I think so.
3.Let's have lunch.
4.They are reading a book.
5.We will sing in the concert
6.Did you pay the bill?
7.My sister did not go to school today.She caught a cold.或she had a cold.
8.you are not late.
9.are you free this afternoon?
i am free after 4.
10.it rained as soon as we left.
11.if she works harder,she would studies better.
12.the film has already been on for 10 minutes.