写作思路：主要写出重庆火锅的历史起源。
正文：
In the 1920s, it developed and expanded in Jiangbei City, Chongqing. Generally, the peddler buys the buffalo tripe, cleans and cooks it, and then cuts the liver and stomach into small pieces.
二十年代在重庆江北城发展壮大。一般挑担子零卖小贩将水牛毛肚买后，洗净煮一煮而后将肝子、肚子等切成小块。
A clay stove was placed on the shoulder, and a large iron basin was placed on the stove. In the basin, there was a kind of spicy and salty sauce, so the laborers at the bridge end of the river were surrounded by the burden.
于担头置泥炉一具，炉上置分格的大铁盆一只，盆内翻煎倒滚着一种又麻又辣又咸的卤汁，于是河边桥头一般卖劳力的工人，便围着担子受用起来。
Every one of them decided that it was not only economical, but also caloric to eat a certain amount of hot food. It was not until the 23rd year of the Republic of China.
各人认定一格且烫且吃，吃若干块，算若干钱，既经济，又能增加热量……直到民国二十三年。
Only a small restaurant in Chongqing city has upgraded it. It has been moved from the shoulder to the table. The clay stove is still there. It has only replaced the divided iron basin with a small red copper pot, and the stew and dip are also changed to be coordinated by the customers themselves, so as to be clean and suitable for the taste of Chongqing people.
重庆城内才有一家小饭店将它高档化了，从担头移到桌上，泥炉依然，只将分格铁盆换成了赤铜小锅，卤汁、蘸汁也改为由食客自行配合，以求干净而适合重庆人的口味。
Hot pot, everywhere, but the most authentic, taste the best number is also the Chongqing hot pot, so students in Chongqing people like to eat.
The characteristics of Chongqing hot pot is hot, hot, hemp, because these three points that Chongqing hot pot is well-known in the world. One is Ma:when we eat hot pot, the first thing he saw was the prickly ash. The pot ofpepper if you eat the last, standard to ensure that you don't stop eating ma.So when your dish to be careful not to let it slip into your dish. Two is the hotspicy: few city than we Chongqing also spicy, began to eat hot pot, saw thepot of oil, it must be "hot" to. If you take a bite, you must be hot to keep drinking water. But when you drink, not stop, will involuntarily began to eat.Because it's not dull as ditch water. The hot, hot satisfy a craving, spicy comfortable. Speak with Chongqing accent, is hot "just"! The three is hot,looked at the pot, you don't have to worry about disinfection not. This problem at the pot was out of the bubble, that temperature is high, if youpick up food immediately eat, must put your tongue out hot several bubble,only in the bowl to cool for a while, you can eat.
In addition Chongqing hot pot and a lot of eat, mainly washing and cooking.Rinse: coming folder, in the pot boiled. The key is to distinguish between a variety of materials not all materials can be boiled food. Generally speaking,tender texture, crisp materials suitable for the rinse water. Cook: namely thematerials into soup cooked. Such as tendons, mushroom, starch, chickensuitable for cooking. These materials texture is dense, must pass through the long time to cook to eat.
Hot pot as our food on behalf of Chongqing, its spicy, the taste of it as weChongqing passionate character, unforgettable!
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本回答被提问者采纳Hot pot - is the most famous and favorite dish in Chongqing. Chongqing local people consider the hot pot a local specialty, which is noted for its peppery and hot taste, scalding yet fresh and tender. People gather around a small pot boiled with charcoal, electric or gas filled with flavorful and nutritious soup base. You have a choice of spicy, pure and combo for the soup base. Thin sliced raw variety meat, fish, various bean curd products and all kinds of vegetables are boiled in the soup base. You then dip them in a little bowl of special sauce. Be careful since the spicy soup base is burning hot.
First eaten by poor boatmen of the Yangtze River in Chongqing area and then spread westwards to the rest of Sichuan. Now is a very popular local flavor and can be found at every corner of the city. There are a great variety of hotpots, including Yueyang Hotpot, Four Tastes Hotpot, Yashan Hotpot and Fish Head Hotpot. If you are adventurous enough, you can basically cook anything with hot pot, e.g., pig's brain and duck's kidney.
Chongqing people love their hotpot, especially when the weather is steamy. The fire dances under the pot, the heavily oiled and spiced soup boils with hazy steam, and the people are bathed in sweat. Although hotpot can be found wherever there are street vendors or small restaurants, chongqing Hot pot has the greatest variety and is known for its delicious soup base and dipping sauce.
Chongqing Malatang:
The other famous local food is hot and spicy Mala Tang. Literally, "ma" means numbness in the mouth, "la" is chili hot and "tang" means piping hot. Mala Tang, with various raw ingredients cooked in a communal pot of steaming stock blended with spices, originated in Sichuan's largest city, Chongqing. The double-sided soup pot, placed on a central table burner, is the focal point of the meal. Powerfully hot Mala Tang soup and fresh tasting chicken broth, side by side, are popular. Ingredients include fresh sliced abalone, sea cucumber, hog tendon, Beijing cabbage and beef dumpling, prawns, carp fish fillet, bean curd, chicken fillet and vegetables. The excellent dipping mixture of sesame oil, chili sauce, peanut sauce, chopped chilies and garlic combine to make magic. Savory tidbits are appetizingly tasty - egg coated glutinous square, crispy spring roll, fried buns, eight treasure black rice and water chestnut jelly.
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Chongqing hot pot with spicy known, are renowned for their large pan behalf pot, red soup bowl is rolling, floating on Ma pepper noodles, pepper, and some I could not utter the name of condiments. Red pot looks like giving the feeling of hot and spicy, often make us foreign tourists daunting. The face of "spicy very tough battle, hemp was badly" Chongqing hot pot, do you dare to try?
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