英语短文改错题，共有十处错误

Question

英语短文改错题，共有十处错误It seems that if the result is bad, which people work for. will be meaningless. Personally speak, the process of fighting for the goal is less important than the result. When we fight for our goals, we will be devoted what we are doing and try to improve us, if we fail in the end, when we look back on the beginning, we will find that we are no longer the childish one,we have grown up. What’s more, in the process of fighting, we got close to success, as the saying goes that failure are the mother of success. So don’t treat the result so serious, just enjoy the process.

Answer 1

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