积分重赏~积分翻倍!!谁能帮我把以下句子翻译成英文~我真的跪谢!!我会加分的!人命关天,大家就帮帮我

这真牵扯到我上大学问题,牵扯到我一生的命运,大家真的要多帮忙!!!再下感激不尽!!相信好人有好报的!!!
这是我想让大家帮我翻译的部分
“我是一名高三毕业的中国学生,我已经被你们大学化学专业录取.我现在雅思成绩是5分,听说读写分别都考过5.5分。由于雅思成绩不够,我将要在你们大学的语言中心进行学习。但是我想申请你们学校的桥梁课程,文化课与语言同时进行学习。希望你们能给这个机会,我很想多学点知识。”

我这人说话没有逻辑,如果哪位好心人能帮我整理好,有好句子的补充,并且翻译好,我有加分!!积分至少翻倍~~~~说话算数!!
再次谢谢各位~!

您好,请参考我的答案。但是,我的经验是,有的专业bridging course是可以和语言一起学,有的大学则是不允许。很多大学的bridging course是和你的专业在第一个学期一起开始的,也不算很难的,就是花时间,您需要有耐心:)

My name is ***, and I am a graduting high school student in China. Recently I received a conditional offer from University of ****** majoring in Chemistry. As a result of my IELTS(0verall 5), I need to attend english courses held by university. I am writing this letter in hope of appying the bridging course so that I would be able to study english and bridging course at the same time. I am looking forward to getting the bridging course as soon as possible.
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第1个回答  2009-08-10
I am a Chinese student recountal, I had been admitted to your university chemical major. my ielts scores are five points, listening, speaking, reading and writing are pass 5.5 points. Because my ielts score is enough to be in your language learning center of the university. But I want to apply for your school curriculum, mix with the bridge language learning at the same time. I hope you could give us the opportunity, I wanted to learn more knowledge.
具体专业名称我不确定 但是这样应该没问题 专业名称你最好还是查一下官方的叫法
第2个回答  2009-08-10
个人觉得国外学校不太会给你这样的机会边读语言边上课,他们很少网开一面的。更何况你语言不过关,学习更加辛苦,没有效果,他们就是抱这个想法开的语言班。你的信写的太没有说服力了,理由简单地毫不让人产生同情感。
第3个回答  2009-08-10
我已经被你们大学化学专业录取.我现在雅思成绩是5分,听说读写分别都考过5.5分。由于雅思成绩不够,我将要在你们大学的语言中心进行学习。但是我想申请你们学校的桥梁课程,文化课与语言同时进行学习。希望你们能给这个机会,我很想多学点知识。”

I'm a Chinese student in senior Three who is close to graduate and have been admitted by the Chemistry major at your university. My IELTS score is 5 and I've got 5.5 for all parts in listening, speaking, reading and writing. But because of my IELTS score, I will firstly study in the language center of your university. However I still want to apply for the course of bridges, taking both cultural courses and language class together. And I really hope you could give me a chance so that I can learn more. Thank you so much.
第4个回答  2009-08-10
I am a Chinese student recountal, I had been admitted to your university chemical major. I now ielts scores are five points, listening, speaking, reading and writing are pass 5.5 points. Because I will ielts score enough in your language learning center of the university. But I want to apply for your school curriculum, mix with the bridge language learning at the same time. I hope you could give us the opportunity, I wanted to learn more knowledge.
第5个回答  2009-08-10
To Whom It May Concered August 10,2009
I am xxx. I am a Chinese high school graduate. I have already admitted by your chemical major department.Due to the low scores of Ielts,(My Ielts score is five.My listening, speaking, reading and writing all passed 5.5.) I have to continue my English study in your language center. But I 'd like to pursue some of the courses in general education, while I am learning my English.I hope I could get this chance to learn more.
I am looking forward to your replay.
Sincerely
xxx