写作思路：确立中心，围绕选材，确定重点，安排详略，选材时要注意紧紧围绕文章的中心思想，选择真实可信，新鲜有趣的材料，以使文章中心思想鲜明深刻地表现出来。具体如下：
"Oh! School is over! Students like a bird out of the cage, rushed out of the classroom. Everyone carrying schoolbags, like a flood to the school gate. It was drizzling when I got home, but I didn't take my umbrella with me. My classmates and I had to hurry home.
After two traffic lights, we finally returned to their homes, but when I got home my clothes were wet, I had to change the clothes, and looked at the time, oh! At 4:30, I immediately put the table clean up, take out the homework, I wrote up with a fast speed.
Because there was a lot of homework today, so I wrote for a long time, half an hour passed, an hour passed, I finally finished my homework. I said to my mother: "Mom, my refill is gone, I'm going to 'square point circle' to buy a few refill." After my mother agreed, I jumped with an umbrella to the "square point circle" ran.
Just walked to the square point round door, looked inside, there is everything, full of beautiful things in eyes. I went in, but I didn't go to the place where they sold pens. I went to the place where they sold books. I don't like to read picture books or comic books.
I prefer books about medicine or science, except when my mother tells me which book to read, I put the medical book down and go to the book my mother tells me to read. When no one tells me what to read, I read medical books.
Because my dream is to be a doctor or a scientist. To read the place took a medical class of books on the bookcase on the side of the read up. I read a book for a while, will take a look at the watch, when the book read half of the time, I looked at my watch, ah! I've been here for an hour.
At this time, I always think that if only time could stop! When I think of here WHEN I reluctantly put the book back into the bookcase. Before I left, I bought a few refill and went home. When I got home, my mother blamed me for taking so long to buy a few refill. Although I was mother said a few words, but my heart is very happy.
“哦！放学喽”！同学们一个个像出笼的鸟儿一样，冲出教室。大家背着书包，像洪水一样涌向校门。回家时下着蒙蒙细雨，但是我没带雨伞，我和我的同学不得不加快步伐赶紧回家。
经过两个红绿灯，我们终于回到了各自的家了，可回到家时我的衣服已经湿乎乎的了，我只好换了下衣服，又看了看时间，哎呀！4点半了，我立刻把桌子收拾了一下，就把作业掏出来，我用飞快的速度写了起来。
因为今天作业很多，所以我写很长时间，半个小时过去了，一个小时过去了，我终于把作业写完了。我对妈妈说：“妈妈，我的笔芯没了，我要到‘方点圆’买几枝笔芯”。经过妈妈同意后，我就连蹦带跳的撑着雨伞向“方点圆”跑去。
刚走到方点圆门口，往里望去，那里面的东西真是应有尽有，琳琅满目。我走了进去，但是我并没有到卖笔的地方去，而是到了卖书的地方。我不喜欢看小人书或漫画书。
我比较喜欢关于医学的书或者关于科普类的书，除了我妈妈指定让我看哪一本书时，我才会把医学书放下，去拿妈妈让我看的书。如果没人指定让我看什么书的时候，我就会看医学类的书。
因为我的理想就是当一个医生或是科学家。到了读书的地方拿了一本医学类的书就靠在书柜旁看了起来。我看一会书，就会看一看手表，当书读到一半的时候，我又看一下我的手表，呀！我已经在这里看了一个小时。
这时我总会想如果时间能停止那该多好啊！当我想到这里时我才依依不舍的把书又放回了书柜。临走前我又买了几枝笔芯回了家。到家以后妈妈责怪我说买几枝笔芯都要那么久。虽然我被妈妈说了几句，但是我的内心却非常快乐。
徐哲年
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追问When I finish my homework, I will go to play with my classmate.